Damn, I love this series

First of all, I must say that I love that you do include Kev and Vee in this series with their own oneshot. I only don't understand why Vee tried to keep her mouth shut so hard. But than again, her questioning that herself when Iggy and Colin don't keep their mouthes shut, is the point of the story, right?
Keep up the work, I'm interessted to see what other ideas you have in mind.

I think you captured each characters personality well, but for this oneshot I must say at some points I found it hard to follow. I can not really say why, and it's not too bad. It could also be, that it was just me having problems, 'cause I'm no native speaker?

This chapter is really cute. I like how you write in from Liam's perspective and make it clear, that Liam doesn't know Mickey as well as the rest of the clan do, because he's so young.
I think you did quiet a fine job capturing Liam's impression on Mickey and his relationship with Ian.
I also think, you got Mickey's way of talking well. I could almost hear his voice in my head, reading it.

So, I actually find these onshots pretty cute.
I like how you capture the slight madness of Ian and Mickeys relationship as well as the Gallagher madness with a few words. I was definitly smiling at some point or another.

I hope you write more!