great chapter eleven videl smirking at her boyfriend gohan you better win

another great chapter videl smirking at her boyfriend and going to be husband gohan no blowing up the ring while krillin is scolding his wife eighteen no killing vegeta

good chpter what is going to happen is videl going to find out that her father was not the one who beat cell and he has been lying to her and the rest of the world and the ones who really beat cell was gogha and the rest of his family update soon

Oh this is such a cool fix so far

lol gohan smirking at his girlfriend videl i love you and because i love you i am saying back out now you can't win

Slow down, mate. There's a three-year gap between Goku defeating the Red Ribbon Army and defeating Demon King Piccolo. That means Goku was 12 and 15 respectively.

Il y a quelque fautes mais sinon part cela j'aime cest pas mal j'attends juste un commentaire dur hercule.

please update again, i woul like to see what happens next. especially if someone has a comment about Hurcle being the strongest and can beat up all of them. or something like that, it would be funny to read.

If you can read past the atrocious spelling and grammar, the plot is funny and has a lot of potential. Try a spell checker and keep it up.

J'aime beaucoup.

cool!

how long till next one

Sorry to be that guy, but Goku was fifteen during the Piccolo saga (he was 12 at the 21st tournament, 15 at the 22nd and 18 at the 23), but of course, it's not like Goku ever took the time to tell Gohan stories and Mr. Piccolo probably doesn't care about age (he's technically only 3~4 years older than Gohan).

But yes, Yamcha is a dead man walking. More than usual.

cool!

So you have a few grammar and spelling errors. example inertduce is actually introduce. As for the grammar errors it is mostly the fact you’re running sentences together and not using symbolsor (?) to express the emotions or moods. Other the that keep updating please.