This is good, I like it.

Ded

O O F There go my shipping hopes, I guess... unless you’d like to renew them of course! P-please renew them...

So is she only going to be Kirito’s big sister figure or can I go into full ship mode for them like I did for playing by ear? XD

I also have a fondness for taming and using a low level monster. Don't get me wrong, high tier monsters are cool but when I play I like to roleplay and I have way more fun pretending to be a guy way out of his league rather than some elite.

As an ace myself I want to take a moment to thank you for including the fact we can and do find other people attractive. Seriously it is shocking how many people seem unable to understand that thinking someone looks good and wanting to sleep with aren't the same thing.

I honestly love the character work you've given Kirito in this fic. I like your representation of him more than the anime's at this point; idk he just seems more real here

Great chapter!

thanks for the chapter personally I find the story great till now but I find the gender part somewhat weird wouldnt everyone see that quite easily? I found it suprising that its already out that its a dream would have imagened it to be something later down the line. Well just am interesting what happens with that info.

Wow, you have much better dreams then I do because mine are Semi-Lucid and I don't really control them although they tend to be more interesting that way. Also, try not to make the Protagonist too weak, they don't really work without plenty of Backstory Explaining why. Otherwise, Excellent story you have so far. :)