not sure if I hate Bell's grandpa or not. telling Bell hero stories is fine but he left out the most important thing. Heroes are not heroes are the start! they train their bodies and skills for years!

I wish you had continued from volume 11 or 12, as it would seperate other fanfics from this one as bell would be starting from a higher level so more intense fighting, also makes interactions between top respected people like Finn, Riveria or aiz more believable and fluent.

Infact, the starting of your draft was great and can branch out further and more fluently so it flows.

But anyways, it’s up to you!

Stranger danger?