First of all, I want to thank you for the names of the places, mountains, lakes, cities, you put in this story because every time I see a name, I google, google map and go on Wikipedia to see and dream of these locations :)

Concerning what I'm gonna write, I hope I'm not too annoying with my habit to look into details :)
In this chapter, I was intrigued and a little confused by Bo's lines during the "50 shades of Gray" BoLo's talk.
After Bo said that she read the books and watched the movies, she explains:
"When the books came out I was a little...conservative...in the sex department. But it was winter, it was cold and I couldn't find a shelter for the dogs who had been out for too long. Anyway, I kind of knew a guy at the theater in Nome".

I don't understand where Bo's dogs were while she was watching "50 shades". Did the guy Bo knew allowed Bo to get her dogs inside the cinema?
Bo is a mystery when it comes to guys, in my opinion. She was vague about this situation and I nearly thought that she experimented her "50 shades of Gray" fantasy with the guy of the cinema.
Nothing wrong with that anyway :)

I love the ending to this chapter. I can see Bo and Lauren really opening up to each other. Their sex scenes never disappoint. I'm also glad you included the nurse crew a bit more in the chapter.

Wow. I see Lauren has more stuff from childhood to deal with also.

Glad you added the note about chapter 24. I almost missed it! I can't thank you enough for continuing to write Lost gorl. You are very talented, and it's wonderful to have this story to look forward to in these crazy times. Hope this continues to find you safe and healthy! All the Best!

Thank you for continuing to write amazing BoLo stories for us avid fans. You know what's funny? I'm 28 years old and I still haven't read Dr. Seuss' story yet. I got curious so I searched for the book you mentioned here. I'm going through a rough patch in my life right now and that book seems fitting. It gave me a little hope. I wouldn't know about the book had you not mentioned it. You gave me hope. I don't know if I'm making sense. English is not my first language and I'm rambling. Sorry. I just want to say thank you. And I hope you never get tired of writing stories about them in the future. Take care of yourself. x

Hi Cuddles

Loving the swings and roundabouts of this story, our ladies don't have it easy, so many obstacles it's exhausting to keep up with at time, I'm hoping this is only a break! Would be great to include a surprise visit from Bo and Duck to Boston, maybe linked to some nefarious plot to Lauren from Evony and the Corrigan sister swoop in with various family backup, just a thought Cuddles..

Is there a short update to finding out way while u struggle with the bigger screen issue of the book? A taster of Ethan as king and a bit more about the Kidnapping I'm interest how the 2 most powerful fae/druids could be subdued...please Cuddles xxx

Ugh! I caught up again! Just as it was getting hot!
Thank-you Cuddlefae, I appreciate your thoughtfulness and sharing of Doccubus faenfiction with love!
Happy writing trails to you, until we meet again!
Peace Beth ZoieFanAnna2

OMG! That was steamy! I’m glad they’re going to work on themselves. They need to be together.

It happens! I wrote and asked this 3 months & 19 days ago :)
FrenChi chapter 3 . May 3
"Hehe! I reread this story and here, in Ch. 3 what I see?! the BoLo talk toys (aoround the middle of this chapter ) well, Bo did bring the topic in fact, believing that was one of Lauren's wishes. It appears that Lauren was not against this idea so my question is: Did they or didn't they try the toy?
I know my comment is strange but I I'm an insatiably curious human (fanfic reader) :))"

I hope Bo will be the one using it on Lauren. I will like how you will write it anyway :) I wouldn't mind Bo throwing Lauren over her shoulder, hop on a sled and taking her to their homestead or an igloo :) Hala! it was Kenzi that Bo threw over her shoulder in LG ep 1x01

Now concerning BoLo, I want to believe they are high on sex, arousal and on the intense desire they have for one another all of that mixed with the event of them being separated soon that intensifies their sexual activities/ love making because I can't picture them as friends with benefits if they don't work together as a couple! No way! {I noticed the Lauren's line from LG: " Did you really think we weren't headed in that direction anyway?":)}

I'm sorry but "sex and that's all" was Bo's love life until she met Lauren and that she fell in love with her. Bo had more than her fair share of men and women's warm bodies being a one- night- stand, f*ck buddies or friends with benefits, she has friends around her who are aware of this (Kenzi) or some who were Bo's hookups (I think of names ) but love with a big L, she never knew and Lauren was not on a better path considering her failed marriage and some meaningless relationships
So NO, no way that BoLo is less than a future happy married couple with mini-BoLo around, Rudy, Mary and all their extended family, including the canine one of course :)

Can't wait to read more with a little fear but I trust BoLo through your writing :)

Well I was totally wrong about this chapter, from assuming it would be drama both our girls showed great maturity it discussing the issues and some of the longest term plans.

While obviously there are still issues that will cause problems the fact that they actually talked about things and about what was both Wright and wrong about their relationship was great, and while they are going to be apart from each other, providing they continue to talk and communicate with each other they should come out stronger.
I just hope that during their separation people like Dyson do not try and play on Bo’s insecurities to try and get back in her bed.

The fact that the girls got back together physically was fantastic and so dame hot and sexy, hopefully It continues into the next chapter.

best thing to come from lock down is not having to wait till after work to read some intensely hot bolo.

I also get the feeling that Lauren is going to become shotgun Allie, just hoping she doesn't have to use it to club some sense into a bunch of upperty elders.

Loved this chapter. They are finally getting each other. I hope they make it.

Ok well that ending was very hot, will it continue on to the next chapter?It must. And while it was sexy and long overdue, I wonder what this means for them? Ok, so they just satisfy their sexual needs but go on their way to live separate lives?

Thank-you, I am happy to hear that you are staying with Bo/Lo and or Doccubus faenfiction. You have shared such a wonderful gift with us all. Peace Beth
ZoieFanAnna2

First of all, thank you for your kind words to us, your readers and best wishes to you as well dear CuddleFae and I agree with you, W Earp is well written, WayHaught is well defined and IMO, I prefer reading Lost Girl/Doccubus/BoLo fanfics than WE so I'm happy you want to keep writing LG stories :)
Now, concerning this chapter, Wow! So many truths were thrown by Shannon and Carolyn to Bo's face and some were said to Lauren afterwards. bo is like en entitled little brat, always in her self pity party and even after all she heard, she couldn't make some apologies or behave a little better. Oooh Bo. even Kenzi agrees with her new friends' statements.
I can't wait to see what Lauren will do in the soon to come chapter 25 and I have this smile thinking about what Shannon said to Lauren "If I didn't know better..." and Lauren answered " It would be amazing" Bo, you just have to know that Lauren wouldn't mind having little Bo babies... :) Quitting her job and living off grid,I'm less convinced... anyway, I have nice pictures of cute BoLo babies in mind now :)
Thank you for writing for us :)