Hey, nice story! Even though i'm not really like KH franchise that much, but i can tell that this story' is gonna be awesome! :D

And if i may criticize, the first chapter was really good! But when i try reading the second and third chapter, i feel it's bit rushed. Not to mention, you need to giving some space to the characters when they doing dialogue.

But nonetheless, it's cool! Now i'm eager to see the next chapter! :D

Oh can you tell me what kind of franchise that Sora landing from?