Reviews for Fall Apart, Fall Together
expressyourselflife chapter 6 . 5/21
i keep seeing you pop up on all my fanfic platforms lmao
SnowflakesandMozart chapter 6 . 7/28/2019
An interesting take on a fix-it. I enjoyed it..
Hieiko chapter 6 . 2/8/2019
Loved this. With one thing changing, everything does.
jdLevengood chapter 6 . 2/4/2019
Great AU story. Interesting view of what would have happened if the Council found out about Padme/Anakin and the twins. Loved the moments with the Skywalker family.
Mako-clb chapter 6 . 1/22/2019
I'm so glad to see Obi-Wan and Anakin coming to an understanding. The prequels made me feel so sorry for Obi-Wan because he basically lost his family for the third time when he lost Anakin.
LPK9 chapter 6 . 1/22/2019
So lovely. I totally agree that Anakin isn’t emotionally able to save the galaxy. And I adore this ending. Love Luke’s fixation on a plushie!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/21/2019
What about Aunt Ahsoka?
Lyn79 chapter 5 . 1/21/2019
Can't wait for more..
LPK9 chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
Wonderful. Though kenobi saying Anakin is lost is MEAN! :-). Go Padme! Also like the reality that Anakin misses the Palpatine that never really existed.
Kondoru chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
Its a very sane and sensible tale.
Mayonaka Yue chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
Now Anakin and Padme can enjoy being a family.
Mako-clb chapter 5 . 1/19/2019
I must say that this AU may be short, but it is interesting because it puts the change not in Anakin or the Jedi so much, but in the simple fact that the twins are born early and Padme survives, and how much having that family there and not in the danger Anakin saw changes things. Well, that and Padme being there to set Anakin on the right path.

I feel so bad for Obi-Wan. The Jedi are his home and family, just like Anakin is, and he's having to choose between them just like Anakin is having to choose.
banzi chapter 4 . 1/17/2019
Enjoying your story.
Mako-clb chapter 4 . 1/16/2019
Generally, I blame Palpatine for a lot because he was a manipulative jerk. But, in this, Anakin is guilty. He has all these messages from Obi-Wan he hasn't listened to, but he takes Palpatine at his word rather than see if maybe Obi-Wan was trying to warn him or help him. Make me, and probably Padme, want to smack him upside the head.
Mako-clb chapter 3 . 1/14/2019
You go, Padme. That's the awesome woman we saw in Episodes I and II. Thanks for keeping her around and leaving Episode III Padme behind.
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