This is very good

Wow I really Loved the story. Just wish there was more because it's so amazing

I love this story! It's so heartfelt and everyone is written so true to character. Great workwork- although I would expect no less from a great writer like you!

So happy to see another chapter. Loved this one so much. It was sweet seeing this sentimental side to FP. And baby Jughead is already so much like him. Please keep writing. Enjoying this story. .

This chapter was touching.

Glad to see another update! Hope there’s more soon.

Loving it.

Love this so far. Keep it up when you have time.

Aww this was so sweet. And touching. Didn't like that you skipped so much in between this. Chapter and last but it worked out well. That moment between two was so needed to clear the air. Glad FP told him he loved him. In his own sudle way he shows him but it was nice to hear it once. Please continue.

So happy you continued. This was so heartbreaking and sad. And yet beautiful. The flashback was perfect. Brought so many emotions. Wish the show would have shown this. Loved the way you write. Brought everything to life. Happy Jughead is getting better.

Loved the update! Hope there is more soon.

This was amazing! Can't get enough of 2x21 fanfics. This was such an interesting take. No ones done Fred so heavy involved. And I loved it. FP's pain and guilt kept off the page. Him not wanting to let Jughead go was powerful. Love the writing style. Wish you'd keep going.

The second paragraph had me in tears. This pulled at the heartstrings in the best way. You could feel every emotion and bit of pain. You wrote everyone so well. Love this episode so much. And your take on it was perfect. The best I've read in awhile. Really really want you to continue. Please?!

Always wonderful reading protective father FP! Also nice to see Fred manage to talk FP down from trying to revenge on what happened to his son ... after all what would Jughead and Jellybean due if their father is sent to prision for attempted murder ... or worse to worse him getting killed.