yo where you at?

update soon plz loved it want more

Are you coming back to finish Tarnished?

Please update soon

I really liked the quote you began this chapter with. It fits Christi-Ana perfectly. I feel sad for Christian but even sadder for Ana. I hope they get to have a happy ending, but I doubt it will end well for a sociopath and a psychopath. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one :)

It keeps getting better and better. Or shall I say worse? Lol. I feel like they're both doomed and even if I know hows it going to end for them, I want to read more and more. Its like how people are caught up in watching a tragic accident.
I hope once you get done with finals you can update sooner. Till then, good luck!
P.S - I really think Jon is going to kill Night King and then become Night King himself so he stays the "True king in the North" and Dany will sit on the throne.

TBH, I don't think Jon wants the throne and would be perfectly happy to let Daenerys have it. I suspect his sister wouldn't like that too much or any of his buds. I don't know if it matters much if the Night King gets his way. The only thing I want and better get is a sweet death for Cerci.

As far as this chapter goes, I don't care what Christian did in that classroom, I wish Ana would give him "something!" And I'm not talking about blowjobs or a good lay. I want her to trust him enough to give him trust in return. But that would be mean she'd have to be willing to give a part of herself that she's too damaged to give. I don't know what Christian did, but I know it was nothing like what the ass did that abducted her. And maybe even her father. That's who really set the hook in her damaged soul, not Christian. So, I really wish she'd quit trying to hurt him because of it. After all, there must be reasons for what Christian did. He's a runaway himself. There has to be a reason for that too. One day maybe she'll see beyond her own fucked-up-ness to see she's not the only one that's been hooked. More, please!;)

That's how you win a jack pot, strategic and brilliant two for one. It will Sweety the pie more if she has a video of him destroying the car. And I hope for Mia's sake, she is not involved in framing her. Thanks for the update

I like how alike Christian and Ana are in certain ways, yet there are subtle differences that sets out their characters uniquely. Both are stubborn, batshit crazy and not outwardly as emotive. Both have a deep connection to music. But Ana has her humor, sass and pop-culture references that makes her a female-version of Deadpool, lol. Christian is more broody and aplha-male type.
I want to say Ana should listen to Christian, but that's not like her. There is obviously a lot of underlying damage to her personality, probably coz of her kidnapping and whatever followed next. I'd like to know more about what altered her personality and made her so cold. Same for Christian and his family history. You do a nice job of hinting at things slightly yet enough to keep readers engaged. Love it!
Good luck on your finals!

Thanks so much for the wonderful update! Looking forward to what you have in store next.

Good luck with your finals and internship applications!

Cait
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I'm thinking this is not going to end well for either of them, least of all Ana. One question, will this story need a sequel to answer all of the questions or is it a stand alone? Thanks for sharing

I laughed out so hard when Christian slapped Ana just imagining her shock! Looks like she really needed that with the impulsive way she is carrying herself, she really needs someone to push her and Christian is perfect for that role.
My vote is on Khaleesi and if not her, then Tyrion. In any case I just want Bronn to get his castels haha, good luck on your finals!

Love GOT. My favorite show ever...hate this is the last season. I hope Jon and Kelesi end up on the throne, but who knows...they may all end up as night-walkers...as long as Cersei is dead and done, I'm good;)
Again a good chapter...although I have to say I felt Ana came off as a bitch taking Christians role in the group. It was really a dick move. He wouldn't give two shits if she sang lead, they sang together, or whatever. I think paranoia is rearing it's ugly head again because he's just trying to help her find a release in that fucked-up head of hers. I'd like to see them sing together, too.
I really wasn't surprised about Christian slapping Ana...lol. That's kinda what I was feeling...lol.. I think if a chick hits a guy, she can't complain if he gives it back to her...lol. Besides, she's so screwed up, it's like foreplay in her crazy head...lol. Anyway, I think they can go tit for tat, but I like them going after others, instead of each other. They should have enough info now to keep themselves from killing each other, since they will be trying to find Leila's brother's identity. More, please!;)

Not sure how I feel about Christian slapping and beating Ana. It seemed to me she was getting turned on by abuse but maybe her time in captivity made her like it? A controversial chapter, but still interesting enough for me to keep going. I just hope their relation doesn't turn abusive.

Brilliant chapter! I look forward to see how they get their revenge on Leila.