I've got one constructive critic for ya. Did ya know you could edit your stories through Document Manager?

Doesn’t pretty much everyone love their sibling?

I absolutely HATE incest, so I would normally pass if it was a ship fic, as in Kagamine Len x Kagamine Rin, or Lincoln Loud x any of his sisters... but this is the exception!

Ahh that was nice. No more Master Frown for ruling the Unikingdom

Unikitty & Puppycorn continue their relationship once more & im happy for them too

(thumbs up(

Uh oh! Richard found out! All thanks to Master Frown & Brock! I dont like this

Shhhh. Dont let Richard find out you & Unikitty are in a relationship, Puppycorn. Keep it low key shhhhh...

Very good story although there was not as much romance as I hoped it was really entertaining.
The site needs more of this ship.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you liked my story!

not everyone is a fan of incest, but I don't mind it... it was filled with drama, love, action, it was all good story! and I'm glad Unikitty and Puppycorn is still together. just don't get Unikitty pregnant(I think that's how its spelled,) Puppycorn.

Well, I am planning on writing another Unikitty x Puppycorn story that is Christmas-themed, but I'm going to save that story for December.

Please make a sequel to this!

Actually, I had considered writing a backstory about Puppycorn being adopted at some point in the story. I chose not to write it because I didn't want to make to story seem too complicated.

I thought you were gonna reveal that Puppycorn was an alien, and that they are therefore step siblings

Master Frown has a dark plan up his cold sleeve...

Also, good chapter. I love seeing some Puppycorn x Unikitty fluff. 3

Please continue this is great