Reviews for What if? (Smallfoot)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2019
I feel like these lyrics from Beauty and the Beast apply to Migo and Percy...
Barely even friends
Then another bends
Unexpectedly
Bittersweet and strange
Finding you can change
Learning you were wrong
I felt this applied in the movie when Percy was terrified of Migo, but then they saved each other in the cave.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2019
I watched this movie a few weeks ago when I was babysitting my little brother. It was awesome, but your fanfiction is beyond awesome. You did the movie justice and thank you for making Migo smarter and more attentive. I also appreciated that Percy received more attention in your story, I didn't feel that he did in the movie. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2019
I loved in chapter 7 when you wrote that they couldn't leave Percy next to the yeti-shaped hole in the wall. That made me laugh.
James Clark ray chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
I see what you did there this is like a reverse version of the cave scene in the movie where percy bandaged migos big toe after his foot for caught in the bear trap only this time percy is the one who gets injured and migo helps him interesting
Guest chapter 8 . 6/22/2019
This was a great story. Write on, my friend!
Calvin chapter 8 . 6/9/2019
Meanwhile with Fleem.
Fleem: Pros and Cons number 127. AAAHHH! This is getting me nowhere!
A goat screamed making the yeti jump off the cliff. The goat turns to the audience and bleats mischievously, almost akin to laughing.
Sunnyflight170 chapter 8 . 6/9/2019
awwwwwwwww! amazing ending! you did great :)
Calvin chapter 7 . 5/9/2019
Ok, who was even in charge of the SWAT to give the 'ok' to tranquilize the yetis? More importantly, who's the guy wanting the yetis brought down? Also, a 9-year old girl named Penny is my favorite opinion.
Sunnyflight170 chapter 7 . 5/9/2019
awesome as always!
Rosecato chapter 6 . 4/21/2019
This is a pretty good fic, I love the idea of 'what if they could understand each other' in this film and I cant wait to see how it ends ;o
Can't wait for the next chapter 3
Sunnyflight170 chapter 6 . 4/11/2019
sorry I'm reading this late, but this is just as awesome as always! :D
james clark ray chapter 5 . 3/29/2019
constants and variables if you played the bioshock trilogy of videogames if you believe everything Elizabeth said in the end of bioshock infinite maybe in an alternate universe percy is able to actually able to speak to the yetis and the yetis are able understand him clear as day
Calvin chapter 5 . 3/28/2019
I hope that in the next chapter, the Stonekeeper brings Migo, Meechee, Percy, Kolka, Gwangi, and Fleem to the secret lair and shows them why he wanted Percy to freeze to death (aka Let It Lie). Great work so far. Hope you upload soon!
Sunnyflight170 chapter 5 . 3/28/2019
I love this- and I'm glad migo is smarter in it. It makes sense why he'd fall for what stonekeeper said in the movie, but it would be weird here. I'm glad you changed that bit. :)
Calvin chapter 3 . 3/9/2019
I'm surprised that Percy didn't comment on mammoths being extinct in his world, though it could be he was having fun seeing the Yeti village and all. Keep up the great work!
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