Hey, I think your Fic is really great so far. Your writing style is good to read and I think you captured the personalities of Colin and Stefan very well.
I really hope you're still planning on continuing thr story because there are not many Bandersnatch stories out there (at least I didn't find many) and I'm really interested in how this goes on...hope there are not too many mistakes in my review, if so I'm sorry. English is not my native language.

Anyways,
Greetings from Germany

Our Stefan is here, paranoid as ever! I'm so worried for Eve. She's doing her best to keep up the act.

Catherine is so nice. I enjoyed the interaction between Eve and Colin. When Mohan called Eve, I was so worried he'll know the truth. I'm excited for the next chapter. Please brighten up Stefan's day.

She got it! But i feel like Colin knows what's going on. I want her to meet Stefan. Anyways, please update!

FINALLY a good story about bandersnatch! I was looking for one since i watched the movie and, god, I already love this fanfic so much. Please, continue! Love ya

I like the writing style. The struggles of finding a job… I'm so nervous for her. I hope she doesn't get caught!

I like it! I think it's gonna be a good story, I like your writing style :) I've been looking for Bandersnatch fanfiction and all I have found is either pretty short (without intentions of continuing) or it just didn't get to me
Continue writing, you have a reader here! Hehe