NICE LIZARD REFERENCE!

Yo so will knull appear hear. I mean he is the strongest symbiote in fact he's there creator. Also knull has seen being on par with a celestial and silver surfer. So will he appear if he does ohh boy these characters better be prepared I mean according to Eddie brock knull is stronger than all of the heroes including the avengers and x-men if he is his true form.

Update new chapters when you can. I’m really loving the story so far.

It's sad to see the state MARVEL is in... We grew up with it, and seeing it destroying itself like this is sad as fuck man... But that Sonic DxD crossover sounds interesting though, maybe I'll check it out.

I enjoyed the fight and the chase scenes, it felt a bit odd at times but still good enough. I specially loved the "Stangers in the night" moment (and a confirmation of Spidey), that was just perfect.

You're really changing this arc, I didn't expect Oyakata to end up bonded (good job remembering that symbiotes multiply the host's abilities).

I hope you can update more

“That's it, no more Disney for a week.”
You hear that sound in the background? That’s me rolling on the ground while losing my shit. Also caught that scene with Anthony… am I supposed to take this as evidence that The Italian Dragon Emperor and The Symbiote of Yokai take place in the same universe?
I would also like to say bravo with that one scene where Oyakata bonds with one of the Symbiotes. That was, frankly, a very clever idea and I’m looking forward to seeing a magic-wielding symbiote.

Now Oyakata has been bonded to a Symbiote.

What is the theme of this story?

Happy April!

1. I felt myself laughing at the Anthony cameo. I'd like to see a George Anderson cameo. He could be a fan of Venom (like how I am one) and either ask for an autograph or give him a Reese's.
2. Well a Witch fused with a Symbiote. That's not good. . .

Ruby is annoying as hell, I hope best parasite Venom teaches her a lesson and I hope you stay healthy

Okay, I am REALLY pumped to see more Symbiotes in this story. Venom is already cool, Riot (although dead) was badass and I've heard Carnage is balls to the wall insane. And now that there's a veritable army of Klyntar, I'm practically bouncing in my seat to see more of them, especially since you could now feasible introduce characters like Mania.

Nice to see Stan lives on in us fans, we'll never forget that marvelous man.

The fight was cool.

Hope to see more soon.

I feel like you're trying to have your cake and eat it with this chapter.

On one hand, Eddie doesn't kill Saizou...but you introduced two OCs that he DID kill. I can get why they might be present here (what with Eddie demonstrating legitimately superhuman strength in the initial confrontation), but I have no idea how you want Eddie (and Venom) to come across here. He just ate two sixteen year olds basically on a whim. Are we supposed to give him credit for not eating a third that happened to be a canon character?

Either way, my primary point of immediately-constructive criticism would probably be that you don't format your dialogue very well. Normally, you create a new paragraph whenever a new person starts speaking (even if that 'speaking' is in the form of thoughts by a new individual), and it's confusing and cluttering to have them all lumped together. This is especially important in a story where the protagonist is sorta-kinda two individuals that can converse with one another. Take the last paragraph of this chapter, for instance: there are five lines of mental 'dialogue' between Eddie and Venom, and they're all wedged into a single paragraph.

Aww, I wanted more but beggers can't be choosers

Fuck I remember venom is weak against fire the leader of the discipline committee uses fire

So, another Symbiote survived its way to Earth.
But that Oyakata would work with a human, Carlton Drake perhaps?, seems a little ooc for her.
Regardless, does that mean than other one, the bluish one, survived?
Great job on this, am loving how Eddie and Venoms presence is slightly changing things.
Look forward to more.
Write on.