Www...gross. Ana is number 16 sub.

Wth who gets a vasectomy that young
Besides they are reversible and I've heard of it not working

Sorry,this story is so disjointed,maybe less will be better.

wow amazing story really emjoyed it thank you

hey great story
i glad you continued with it.
please dont take one person negativity get to you i have read a few of your stories and there amazing
so thank you and keep up with your amazing writing.

Sequel please SEQUEL! This ain’t done

hi.. l'm enjoying ur story.. its really good.. i'll continue reading yeah..

but I keep forgetting to take them since I met you"...I just burst out laughing. Of all the people to say that to! Hilarious.

You're doing a good job. I'm enjoying the story. Thanks.

Ana is changing Christian slowly but only to a point for then he would not be Christian Grey anymore. Ana is getting to know him more and adjusting a bit for him so they can meet in the middle. It is all about giving and taking without force, thereby still respecting boundaries. Thank you very much and a sequel is a must.

Now they are more in tune and speaking of the same language it seems?

Even Sawyer is persistent when Ana already said no about her posing for Jose's for a book over. Ana's friends cannot take a no answer, has she been easily manipulated by them? She is a proin dealing with papz.

Open discussions in front of Christian so he is getting acquainted how her close friends and acquaintances are with Ana. Ana needs to learn to say no in giving in to favors to her friends who seems to had gotten used in really using her.

I agree with Christian, her ex lover Luke should not be a security detail for Ana, even they are just friends now. Christian does not have Ana's frame of mind and can't hardly force him to change himself completely after having adjusted to her many behaviors already. She has to have a bit respect to for his sanity.

Lots of tidbits about her and her loose actions and easiness about everything around her like no big deal, she can deal with anything and so opposite Christian that rather be away from them all.