This story is amazing.
It's the first story to make me cry and I'm a guy.
Thank you for making this story. :)

The story is not bad but my eyes are going to cry blood from many orthography errors

Good start. Turned off when Liz was banished from Harry

I can't read anymore, she had her weapon aimed at the death eater and when she realised what he was she drew her wand instead, why the fuck did she not keep her weapon out and when he went to cast just shot him? Wish you luck with your story but it's not for me.

Good story but the amount of mistakes diminish the story. Very few police officers in the U.K are firearms trained and they don't take their weapons home. Maybe get a beta who can polish your story.

you might want to fix some of the spelling, but other than that, this is really great so far

I hope Harry caught her! Is she pregnant? Great story!

I like your story! It has style, the characters are 3D, and I like it when Harry has siblings. I don't see what anyone would complain about.

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Great job!

Great chapter. i like where this is going :)

I love it! Feels just like my pregnancy to me, and I would like to see Harry reacting to the pregnancy a little more, but I love the realism. I am really loving the story. At what point will Elisabeth figure out that Moody is not the real man?

I don't understand what is going on

Great Chapter as always. can't wait to see where this goes.