| Reviews for Twelve Red Lines |
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   ShineX chapter 2 . 7/28 Well alright then, things should potentially start spiraling off soon with those changes. |
| ShineX chapter 1 . 7/28 "Cold steel pressed more firmly against my neck"... so he's threatening a known suicide attemptee with more death? Very effective -_- While the initial setting makes me squeamish, so far it isn't bad. I'm interested in how this goes at least :) |
| Belle Sparrow chapter 35 . 7/12 I love how you wrote Usopp's fight with Enel! 3 |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/10 Iiiiiiiiii dunno, I think jones took that one |
| SpicyArbiter chapter 18 . 7/11 Control over friction is useless? Uhm, I’m gonna have to disagree with you there |
| Belle Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/7 I'll probably be commenting again later today, but I wanted to let you know that your portrayal of Jones' emotional state and thought process was really well written! |
| Blacksheep28 chapter 23 . 7/5 I adore the Unluckies so much! |
| Blacksheep28 chapter 20 . 7/4 Poor Jones never gets a chance to recover, always working with less than she has |
| Blacksheep28 chapter 19 . 7/3 Poor Jones just gets beaten all the time. They need snuggles |
| Blacksheep28 chapter 17 . 7/3 Ghin is fast turning into one of my favorites! Are you from a French community? And maple syrup is awesome! |
| Blacksheep28 chapter 13 . 6/25 I love dinosaurs! I loved this so much |
| Blacksheep28 chapter 11 . 6/25 Really wish I could hang out with Jones |
| IcedWolff chapter 35 . 5/26 Just got all caught up and I have to say: Wow! This has very quickly become one of my favorite One Piece fan fictions. As someone who deals with anxiety a lot, I love Jones as a character because of how relatable she is - especially when it comes to not knowing how to deal with people. Jones getting into a fight with Vivi because she’s better at tactics than empathy hit me on a personal level. Also - I know fourth wall breaks aren’t for everyone, but I find yours super entertaining, lol. Keep up the great work! |
| CirceSays chapter 35 . 5/23 (Hello, I’m CirceSays, I just haven’t logged in yet!) Wow! I’m astounded and amazed by this fic! It’s quickly grown to be one of my favorites in the OP fandom, and the crossover chapter I remember reading in This Bites! further made me cackle at the shenanigans and amazingness that is Jones. It’s honestly awesome! I must say, I’m worried for poor Marian. She’s a spitfire and I’d hate to see her die... though I suspect you have something up your sleeve. I’m excited to see what’s next! (And I find myself even more intrigued at the suspicion that Sanji is going to have to re-evaluate his behavior just a tad towards females...) |
| Jazzirah chapter 35 . 5/24 Wow! This chapter was really exciting. I love this whole story too though! It’s amazing! |
