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InsaneMakaioshin chapter 14 . 8/28 1. I once theorized that before the military became the Gotei 13 Oetsu was the commander of it, with Ichibei heading the kido corps(only character to know the forbidden Hado) & Senjumaru being the stealth force commander(her followers are dressed like stealth force soldiers)! Tenjiro was the original Captain of squad 4, after the previous 3 left to create the Royal guard(he’s the healer of the Royal guard) & Yamamoto took over! Could you implement this into your story? 2. I theorized that Kenpachi Kuruyashiki be a member that faked his death after “losing” to Azashiro & fell into a coma before Kirio joined! Could you work that in? 3. Since we know that the stealth force has 5 Corps Commanders of 5 divisions, with 1 as the Commander in Chief & all of them are the top 5 seats in squad 2. could you introduce the commanders of the detention unit, Inner Court Trooper Unit & the unknown 4th unit? 4. Who's the current Kido Commander Grand Kido Chief & Vice Kido Chief? 5. Will video game characters and story lines appear? It’d be interesting to see how Seigen Suzunami & Shinji interact. Kai would be cool to see. Bansui & Arturo wrap up my list of my 4 favorite game original characters. Which is why I want to know if they’ll be included. You could say part of Arturo escaped being sealed in the Sokyoku & was later sealed in the mirror! Arturo is a naturally occurring arrancar, as he was imprisoned before the hogyoku existed! 6. Could Baishin be the 6th Kenpachi? If the title changes just under every century, it works! It explains why it took 6 captains to defeat him! They weren't from Squads 1, 4, 8, or 13 for obvious reasons! That leaves 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 11, or 12! 7. Will we see the original 13 captains? the original 5 Stealth Force Commander? 8. Will we see the west branch do anything? Could they be apart of the Kido Corps, as its members are called Witches & Wizards? I believe all, but one, of the divisions of Wing Bind are apart of the Kido corp, because of them being Witches & using Spells almost identical to Kido. I think Gallows is the exception, due to being in charge of punishment, thus fitting more with the stealth force, the unknown 4th part. That makes Wolfgang the 4th seat of squad 2, the commander/Top of horn of Gallows! 9. Could Dragons be the Komamura's Species's version of Menos, as in Buddhism, which Bleach is based on, those ruled by their beastly nature become beasts in the beast realm?! wiki/Sa%E1%B9%83s%C4%81ra_(Buddhism) 10. Will Gisselle revive all the seated officers, 20th seat & up, the Stealth Force Commanders & Grand & Vice Kido Chief, the dead Espada & Numeros as part of her army? 11. Since Grimmjow was 12 before becoming an Espada, Barrigan was probably 19, 21, 23, or 28, due to his fraccion being around that number, like Grimmjow is with his! That means Nel is 40 or 43, Tia is 53 or 57, Gilga is 49 or 51. Assuming all the espada, except Starrk were Numeros, that means there's roughly 42 Unknown Numeros out there! That would imply that Asguiaro, Luders & Yin & Yang were made by Aizen! Them & The Hammerhead Arrancar brings it down to 37! Szayelaporro & his at least 11 Fraccion should be between 62 & 76. He can't be younger than Wonderweiss, #77, as he was created after Grimmjow's demotion! He definitely wasn't an Arrancar, when he was number 0,because his brother, who was still apart of him as 0, became an arrancar before him! Hammerhead was before Halibel, so 51-53! Yin & Yang would've been made at the same time, so 28-32, 36-40, 43-9, 51-3, 57-60, 62-76, or 78-99, because DDR takes place after Aizen's defeat, because Uryu has his powers back, since Ichigo asked him to track Hitsugaya, & Ichigo knows about Arrancars! 12. Will Hell Verse even take place without the fight between Ichigo & Ulquiorra to inspire the villain? 13. What's the 5th noble family? Were the Ryodoji Family directly under the Shiba, because the Tsunayashiro could have banished them to weaken the Shiba?! Sorry if I sound like an A*hole, but I had a lot of bleach theories that went nowhere & looking for an out! |
Yamajiji chapter 14 . 8/25 Kenpachi getting his shikai and bankai is awesome. Can’t wait to see more of this. |
Yamajiji chapter 13 . 8/25 Nice lemon. I’m really liking this story. The only thing I find worthy of criticism is the fact that you’re ignoring Ichigo’s family. Isshin, Karin and Yuzu have no idea of what is happening, and I imagine Ichigo would at least go to the human world for a short time to tell them. |
Yamajiji chapter 6 . 8/25 Poor Ichigo. He has real bad PTSD. Him laying down knowledge on some captains was cool though. |
Yamajiji chapter 5 . 8/25 This was fucking awesome. Loved Unohana acting like herself. Everyone will be leveled up by the time the Blood War comes along. Toshiro and Renji will improve Bankai, and Rukia and Kenpachi will unlock them. I’m fucking hyped. Seeing Sui-Feng get shitted on was cool too. |
Yamajiji chapter 3 . 8/25 That was fucking awesome. I assume all their efforts are going to focus on Yhwach. Can’t wait. |
Reaper74Kill chapter 14 . 8/2 Fcking awesome. Cant wait for the next chapter. |
Saint XVII chapter 14 . 7/25 Ngl this story was fucking fantastic idk why you didn’t continue you it but if you see this please write more chapters, idc if it’s only once a week or every two weeks jus continue this please ! |
InsaneMakaioshin chapter 14 . 7/22 1. I once theorized that before the military became the Gotei 13 Oetsu was the commander of it, with Ichibei heading the kido corps(only character to know the forbidden Hado) & Senjumaru being the stealth force commander(her followers are dressed like stealth force soldiers)! Tenjiro was the original Captain of squad 4, after the previous 3 left to create the Royal guard(he’s the healer of the Royal guard) & Yamamoto took over! Could you implement this into your story? 2. I theorized that Kenpachi Kuruyashiki be a member that faked his death after “losing” to Azashiro & fell into a coma before Kirio joined! Could you work that in? 3. Since we know that the stealth force has 5 Corps Commanders of 5 divisions, with 1 as the Commander in Chief & all of them are the top 5 seats in squad 2. could you introduce the commanders of the detention unit, Inner Court Trooper Unit & the unknown 5th unit? 4. Who's the current Kido Commander Grand Kido Chief & Vice Kido Chief? 5. Will video game characters and story lines appear? It’d be interesting to see how Seigen Suzunami & Shinji interact. Kai would be cool to see. Bansui & Arturo wrap up my list of my 4 favorite game original characters. Which is why I want to know if they’ll be included. You could say part of Arturo escaped being sealed in the Sokyoku & was later sealed in the mirror! Arturo is a naturally occurring arrancar, as he was imprisoned before the hogyoku existed! 6. Could Baishin be the 6th Kenpachi? If the title changes just under every century, it works! It explains why it took 6 captains to defeat him! They weren't from Squads 1, 4, 8, or 13 for obvious reasons! That leaves 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 11, or 12! 7. Will we see the original 13 captains? the original 5 Stealth Force Commander? 8. Will we see the west branch do anything? Could they be apart of the Kido Corps, as its members are called Witches & Wizards? 9. Could Dragons be the Komamura's Species's version of Menos, as in Buddhism, which Bleach is based on, those ruled by their beastly nature become beasts in the beast realm?! wiki/Sa%E1%B9%83s%C4%81ra_(Buddhism) 10. Will Gisselle revive all the seated officers, 20th seat & up, the Stealth Force Commanders & Grand & Vice Kido Chief, the dead Espada & Numeros as part of her army? 11. Since Grimmjow was 12 before becoming an Espada, Barrigan was probably 19, 21, 23, or 28, due to his fraccion being around that number, like Grimmjow is with his! That means Nel is 40 or 43, Tia is 53 or 57, Gilga is 49 or 51. Assuming all the espada, except Starrk were Numeros, that means there's roughly 42 Unknown Numeros out there! That would imply that Asguiaro, Luders & Yin & Yang were made by Aizen! Them & The Hammerhead Arrancar brings it down to 37! Szayelaporro & his at least 11 Fraccion should be between 62 & 76. He can't be younger than Wonderweiss, #77, as he was created after Grimmjow's demotion! He definitely wasn't an Arrancar, when he was number 0,because his brother, who was still apart of him as 0, became an arrancar before him! Hammerhead was before Halibel, so 51-53! Yin & Yang would've been made at the same time, so 28-32, 36-40, 43-9, 51-3, 57-60, 62-76, or 78-99, because DDR takes place after Aizen's defeat, because Uryu has his powers back, since Ichigo asked him to track Hitsugaya, & Ichigo knows about Arrancars! 12. Will Hell Verse even take place without the fight between Ichigo & Ulquiorra to inspire the villain? 13. What's the 5th noble family? Were the Ryodoji Family directly under the Shiba, because the Tsunayashiro could have banished them to weaken the Shiba?! Sorry if I sound like an A*hole, but I had a lot of bleach theories that went nowhere & looking for an out! |
Elizabeth loines chapter 1 . 7/21 Please continue |
InsaneMakaioshin chapter 14 . 7/11 1. I once theorized that before the military became the Gotei 13 Oetsu was the commander of it, with Ichibe heading the kido corps(only character to know the forbidden Hado) & Senjumaru being the stealth force commander(her followers are dressed like stealth force soldiers)! Tenjiro was the original Captain of squad 4, after the previous 3 left to create the Royal guard(he’s the healer of the Royal guard) & Yamamoto took over! Could you implement this into your story? 2. I theorized that Kenpachi Kuruyashiki be a member that faked his death after “losing” to Azashiro & fell into a coma before Kirio joined! Could you work that in? Sorry if I sound like an A*hole, but I had a lot of bleach theories that went nowhere & looking for an out! |
Collin125267 chapter 14 . 7/8 Moooaarrrr |
One piecerules100 chapter 14 . 7/6 Like the story please update soon |
InsaneMakaioshin chapter 14 . 6/30 Will video game characters and story lines appear? It’d be interesting to see how Seigen Suzunami & Shinji interact. Kai would be cool to see. Bansui & Arturo wrap up my list of my 4 favorite game original characters. Which is why I want to know if they’ll be included. |
dragonfighter11 chapter 14 . 6/23 Looking forward to more. Is he ever going to go see Kisuke or his family? lol Like the pairing, only thing better would be adding Nel~ |