Wow, that was amazing! I love this chapter, there were a couple of spelling mistakes but nothing you couldn't easily fix. That line about Annika becoming a killer had me gasping. I know I shouldn't be surprised, but still. Piper is a great character and their reactions around her were realistic. But yeah, good job!

“Gone for good”? I swear, if you killed Leo... Remember our lunch conversation.
~Quinn~

I like this! You’re one of the few fan fiction authors I’ve found who has delved into the Aphrodite campers backstories—so thank you!

It always annoys me to see how people treat the Aphrodite campers: it’s as if because lots of them wear makeup and like clothes, they’re not important characters/people, just empty heads who are shallow.
The way you present your Aphrodite characters breaks that mold. They are given a story. A personality. It was wonderful to read that.

Great job and wondering writing!

-guacamole lover

I like this