Reviews for Fractured
seireidoragon chapter 22 . 8/26
This was a wonderful story that ended pretty well. I can't wait for the wedding and the finale. Peanut's true identity was also super fun to learn.
KingofHell16 chapter 22 . 10/27/2019
Hi

I didn’t comment the first time I read this, nor the second time, but I did want to say that I absolutely adore the stories in this series

I actually read all of them in one night in some sort of manic, content starved fury and it wasn’t until now that I went back, slowed myself down, and read them again and just-

Wow, your writing style is infectious, your character depictions are on point, and the stories themselves are an absolute delight to read.

Like I have read them before, I know what was going to happen, and I was still on the edge of my seat.

I cannot tell you how excited I am to continue reading your work!
Guest chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
After your done with your Trollhunters redemption arc maybe you could do one for 3below just incase you want to write more and need some new story ideas.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
So Morganna has partially escaped and part of her spirit is in Lance's body. I was really hoping that Lance would've died by the end of this fanfiction though. Can you please kill Lance eventually may to finally kill Morganna for good. Also maybe have Claire use magic to extend her because Jim is part troll so his lifespan should be extended to almost as long as theirs.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
Wait the cat is Oberon?
Littleladybaker chapter 22 . 9/2/2019
AAAAAAHHHHH! This was so good! I love that Jim used part of his horns to make part of Claire's ring and I love that his troll dads helped him make it. I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't believe there are going to be two more!
Aquacoral14 chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
AAAAAGGGGHHHHH
I can’t decide if I love you or hate you for that cliffhanger! (All jokes, seriously, you are awesome and a literary genius).
And HA! I knew the Fetch was not gone! But oh dear god she’s back WHYYYYY. Jim and Claire’s engagement! Their future wedding! They’re happy why would you DO THIS.
Ok, ok, I’m calm now. Mostly. Now for the gushing over how indescribably cute Jim’s ring was!
Awww, it’s bits of his horns and he made it and they’re so sweet I might have a cavity but it is one I will gladly have. Also, I love that they’re doing a nine-month engagement. That is straight up my favorite thing (other than the ring and the two of them and- you get what I mean), because they know each other so well and they’re content to take their time and that to me signals that they’re really in love because they aren’t rushing into it!
Also, I really liked how you wrote Toby’s fear/anxiety over using the gauntlets.
Anyway, excitement aside, thank you so so much for this chapter! I love it, it’s one of my favorites so far, and I’m very excited for your planned continuations! (But take a break if you need, you can’t write as/be as awesome if you’re stressed/tired from being amazing)
Thank you!
Unstoppable Cyborg chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
Wow, that ring sounds so cool

"Let me ... the time." Good job with the tact, Jimbo, and I mean that with all sincerity

Oh FUCK! Getting Lance exorcised is probably going to be * much * harder
Vospader21 chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
Ooh, naughty Claire. It’s not time yet for any excessive canoodling. And wow was this an amazing chapter, so much heart in every single character. By your description of the next installments it seems like the finale will be as world shaking as the finale of the actual show was.

Hey just as a reminder don’t forget to invite these people to the wedding they all helped too.
-The Pheonix
-The Deep One (or at least a representative from the Krubera
-The fairies from Avalon
-The Unicorn
-The Lady of the Lake
-Peanut
Story ideas chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
I can't wait to see what you've got planned for your last 2 stories, and are you excited for Wizards coming out this fall? I know I am
Monkey D. Conan chapter 22 . 9/1/2019
Now that was all kinds of awesome! You have a real gift for this. I can’t wait for Jim and Claire’s wedding. Poor Lance, hopefully he can be saved. I do wonder though since you mentioned it with Claire, what’s your head cannon for Jim’s age expectancy given he has the amulet and a troll form? Will you be writing out both actual weddings or will it just be more of a mention after some preparations and before dealing with whatever comes? Also, we need to see Jim interacting with Claire’s family some. In the show her family couldn’t see the real Jim and so completely misinterpreted him, except for the very end. Anyway, I look forward to more in the future. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Vospader21 chapter 21 . 8/31/2019
I like the calm and quiet atmosphere that this chapter gives off. It really drives home the impact of the events of the last chapter.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/24/2019
Great chapter I like how it's all starting to wrap up. I would like you to write about the therapy sessions please because I think that it would be entertaining. Also maybe have Jim convince Corrin to visit his mother and reveal the truth to her I'm sure that she will still accept him and will still love him.
Littleladybaker chapter 21 . 8/24/2019
Darcy and Mary are a treasure and I love every second of their screen time.
I flippin' adore Bagdwella! Seriously love her!
I can't help but wonder if Nomura is going to gain a family in the future.
Finally! Jim's gettin' some therapy for all the shit he's been threw.
And, last but not least, NEXT SET!? YOU'RE DOING ANOTHER BOOK!? I CAN'T WAIT!
Monkey D. Conan chapter 21 . 8/24/2019
Yeah, it’s about time Jim got to see the baby...I bet she’s adorable too. Excellent work as always! So will we at least see Jim giving Claire a ring before the end? Can’t wait for more!
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