Ohhhhh they ate adorable, you’re an amazing writer an nothing is new under the sun hahahah. Hope you get to continue this one.

LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH

I just loved this story. Really really enjoyed it. Great work!

I just reread the first two chapters of this last night, so I actually screamed and stopped studying to read this as soon as I got the notification. I loved this story so much! It gave me the warm and fuzzies (you know, when I wasn’t crying or cussing out Harvey) and just genuinely enjoyed reading it. Thank you!

I REALLY love this. This is fab! Ugh I can hear them and I can see them and I’m here for the upstairs!

I liked this short story. Three chapters to develop the intrigue and reach a (very satisfying) conclusion… I liked the fact that you included Jessica in the mix. She is instrumental in Harvey's growth as a lawyer and as a man (besides Donna) so it's only fair she's be involved in this mess! I also always love when they leave New York :)

Right, I LOVE this. Only on first chapter but the voices are totally there and I don’t mean just Donna and Harvey. Mike was so so clear. Okay, off to read on!

Loved it! ️
I'm currently speechless from all the goodness and I promise to write a better comment later.

I’m a sucker for Harvey calling Donna gorgeous, and that first scene was so simple but so beautiful to read at the same time! Their simple domestic bliss is what makes them real! The banter between Harvey and Mike is hilarious, I can picture every bit of it. And Rachel needing to know all the details, if that isn’t her! You write all the various characters so well. And that pool scene...oh my god. That was everything and more. It was so SO good! I loved the sexy playfulness of it. Excited to read more of your stories to come! Thanks for sharing this one. :)

Thank you for this amazing fic! I could have read multiple more chapters of this, but I will also look forward to everything else you will write!
Your love for details makes your writing so enjoyable and special. And this story made me laugh more than a few times!

Well, halle-fucking-lujah to this story! It's SO good!
So many characters together in one place, and so well written. It's a lot of fun! And all the feels, too!
There are so many extremely funny descriptions and dialogue in this. Can't wait for the next part!

Wow this made me feel all kinds of ways and I loved every second of it! Loved the idea. Loved the writing.

Omg, I LOVE this story! They got together and I thought it was the end, but there's more? This is what I deserve! Thank you!

So! This was so much fun and emotional in all the right places! I also love the whole atmosphere you've created with the beach-pool-itally. Can't wait for this pool fun scene you mentioned.

You're writing everyone's perspectives/internal musings! I've never seen anyone do so many and I'm glad they're all very sensible and in character!

I love love love darvey's interactions, the dialogues, the fights (I gasped much! Hahaha I was shook!). Really, love all the dialogues, they're super in character and fun and that's all I want from a fic.

"So long as you promise you'll come back to me I'll find a way to be okay with it." MELTED MY HEART!

Looking forward to the next chapter! This was great!

Oh wow. This chapter was EVERYTHING. Can we send some of this dialogue directly to the show?
I pretty much died during Harvey's speech. So good.
Update soon!

Wowwwwww! So good!