| Reviews for Writes of the Stranded |
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RedShirt1453 chapter 10 . 11/25/2019 If they rummage through the crate and bring it back then they have a secure object to store valuables such as food. |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2019 Knives like that dont rust all the way through, get a nice rock and they can start to sharpen it back up... And there are likely Larger Fortifications hidden elsewhere... |
RedShirt1453 chapter 9 . 8/19/2019 So obviously this Island hosted a Japanese garrison during the War. The file Weiss found was in English and referenced a Dr. Am- in English. My assumption is the island was ignored during the island-hopping campaign and the Garrison simply ran out of supplies and starved. But I think there is more to it than that. The Dr. Am- and whomever else obviously came back to the island for research. |
MeteorElDrago chapter 9 . 8/17/2019 Are you serious is everyone gonna get hurt on this island? Still I wonder what are the pairings here? I've been wanting to ask this for a while and the curiosity has been killing me still great chapter so keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter update. |
Axccel chapter 7 . 7/26/2019 Why would Yang be leading anyone? She’s horrible material for leadership. Even without her anger problems. There are reasons why Jaune and Ruby were chosen by Ozpin. They lead. When shit hits the fan or leadership is needed, they both step up, recognize peoples skills, and put those skills together to benefit the group. Yang is basically the opposite of that. |
Axccel chapter 1 . 7/26/2019 I get the feeling Jaune’s camping skills will be ignored and one or more girls will be magically better than him at everything he’s supposed to be good at. |
grecefar chapter 8 . 7/26/2019 That was sad, jaune family sucks, I hope that sister he was talking is worried and is telling the parent that is their fault. |
MeteorElDrago chapter 8 . 7/25/2019 Man Jaune has it rough still glad to see he cleared the air with Pyrrha and got a cool scar too. So keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter update. |
PF115 chapter 8 . 7/25/2019 Last time I didn't mean that I want Jaune to die, I just meant that his atitude is closer to 'I'll do what I can or die trying.'. |
PF115 chapter 8 . 7/25/2019 Nice chapter. |
ExactChase chapter 7 . 7/2/2019 My inner Lost fan is waiting for the trees to go “ticka ticka”, but I somehow doubt it’ll happen. Good job so far, regardless. |
PF115 chapter 7 . 6/21/2019 A suggestion for Jaune: maybe you he could do one of two things. One: manage to find/get/hunt decently; or two: he would get moody, see himself as worthless, and (if it's close enough) try to swim to the plane to retrieve the radio, or die trying. |
Dr. Beege chapter 7 . 5/17/2019 Honestly didn’t expect it to be Blake to stick up for Jaune. I kinda figured you would let tension boil over until one, most likely Yang, would pop over a miniscule hiccup which would snowball into a physical altercation that would leave some form of lasting damage on one of them. I mean hell, it still could. Yang may have admitted it to herself but she is still overly prideful and headstrong. (Or so canon has told us. Not sure how close they mirror in this one.) |
grecefar chapter 7 . 5/17/2019 Seeing that jaune is the only male I thought that this would be a harem fic, but it looks like it will be yxb rxw and jxp by the way you're doing the scenes and how often they're together. |
gothboy.wxlf chapter 7 . 5/16/2019 It seems (so far) at Ruby is the level head bc Pyrrha follows orders to the T no matter how unorthodox it may seem (ofc excluding obviously stupid orders), and Weiss is just as (if not more so) hot headed then Yang here. In ways of self importance, pride, and narcissism. Blake is the coolest head second to Ruby, only rendering her second due to her incapability to actually helping due to her injury. Now Jaune, while being an invaluable part of the team, he seems to be the most naive in thinking, often then not comparing their situation to a fictional mode of story (i.e movies). (Sorry this is personal notes I’ve gathered so far from the story (usually in archives of our own have personal forms of putting notes on a fic you bookmarked) so sorry and if you’d like to debate my views/gatherings of the story pls feel free to dm me) |