Wait you made an author note to mention that you had a plot reason for changing the hair on Yugito while not mention why Pakura's hair color was swapped? But if that is the only real complaint i have with the story so far i am ok with knowing she is still around

please tell me temari is in there somewhere? i remember you saying hell no to hinata so i'm not gonna bother as for sakura... hard maybe vote from me

This story is certainly better than the original, but where that one went too far into mindless smut, this one has too much drama for me. Angstsmut feels very weird. Shame the Contract rewrite is dead, that one was perfect imo

Also gotta agree with another review, kyuubi should be the heroine, haven't seen her in like 70% of the chapters.

Bon chapitre

Oh? Well I guess yugito is paying for her mistake in distancing herself from Matatabi so brutally. Oh well,

I have no clever way of saying this but please continue. Also, a side note...when at all are we going to finally let Naruto see Kyuubi without such extra circumstances?

Like, I don't know if this is just your way of having him grow without Kyuubi around, but it's kinda depressing that they can't even communicate or anything. It doesn't feel at all like they'd keep liking each other.

Naruto maybe, because that's just the naruto way. But Kyuubi doesn't have reason to do that. And just having her buried in the seal at all times just is unfair. This is literally no better than the annoyance I had with the original.

I wasn't the best fan of the circumstances surrounding kyuubi and the lemons did get pretty out of hand...but you both (you and yagami) have this obsession with refusing to just let naruto and kyuubi have their moment.

I mean his original thing was about having Kyuubi and also the other girls. But the annoying part about this specific fic is it isn't at all about that. It's naruto banging and being all lovey with anyone except for kyuubi.

It isn't cute. It's sad. I just feel bad for her always having to be in the background while the one guy she likes bangs every member of her species except for her. How would anyone find this even remotely possible to enjoy the lemons? They don't even feel enjoyable. It's just a distraction so hopefully people forget that the one he first fell in love with is trapped inside his gut with no way of escape or communication.

Where's Kyuubi's chance at love after being fucked over for centuries? The whole Mira pregnancy I hate too. Boo hoo I love him. It just makes me mad because she gets her happy ending first. Why must Kyuubi continue to suffer for the sake of plot? Where's her justice? Where's her moment of Naruto assuring her that he loves her? Where's her chance to be worried he might die because she's his lover? When does she at all get a child of her own to smile and be proud of? When does she finally get to stop suffering all this unfairness? Why is she the only one suffering here? None of the other people seem to care that she is forced to be entirely alone AGAIN for who knows how long because fuck our queen! Why do none of her guardians have nothing to say? Why is miss "I will kill you because you hold our queen" not doing anything? We got one basic ass "I have read your seal, make a seal to open it" and then nothing!

The level of unfair punishment to a being that has already suffered immensely is rediculous. It's like catching an animal by the foot with a metal trap, letting it go, only to trap it again later with the same foot breaking the foot bit by bit. I mean, you can't not see the suffering your forcing on her here. There had better be one hell of a pay off! This story is just making me more depressed the more it goes on. It truly feels like she'll never escape and instead just dwindle away for eternity with no one to love her.

Just leave her alone man. It's torturing me. And I'm not even part of the story. Y'all real good about making me not enjoy a story or it's lemons from being too depressed to enjoy it. Thanks for that.

Just...*sighs* forget it. You wouldn't understand. Just ignore me and keep going...like you weren't gonna do that anyway.

Damn still killed off yugito huh? Harsh.

Great chapter looking forward to more

When was the impregnation lemon between Naruto and Mira!?

Yugito got sealed in the Gedo Maizo!? Damn, that is harsh!

It's good to see an update, but there's something that's been bugging me. I seem to remember in an earlier chapter (though I don't know which one) it was mentioned to Mira and Erza that Kyuubi's and Naruto's souls are linked together and to kill one would kill the other and yet twice now a situation has arisen where that tidbit of information would have if not defused the situation would have at least given pause long enough to defuse it and both times they have failed to mention that fact. Assuming I'm not just remembering why is it that little nugget of information seems just to be forgotten every time a perfect situation to use it crops up?

Grayfia does actually use Ice Magic, although not exclusively, it is her forte. (You can trust me on this as I am WELL past the anime and manga as I have finished reading the Light Novel and have even caught up on the sequel to the Light Novel) As such... GRAYFIA! Also Levy as a Fairy without wings? Oddly appropriate. Never would have thought of that one. And believe me, I have been giving some thought on what she would be since you've begun mentioning her. Then there was Grayfia and when you began to describe her, I'll admit, I thought it was Levy and that it was a different Levy than I originally thought, wouldn't be the first time a name has been reused in anime. However once I read her name I was like," OH SH*T! IT'S F*CKING GRAYFIA!" I mean she is the woman who is known as the "Strongest Queen" in the entire show so you know she's amazing! Nevermind the fact that she's Maou-Class! (It goes Low, Mid, High, Ultimate, Maou, Super, God, and Transcendent) So whilst she's a only in the Middle on that rung, the Transcendent Class was only recently added! Technically Super and God class are highly similar in power, depending on the God, so you can take that one off of the list itself! That would put her at the 2nd highest tier on the rung. To put it in terms, Sirzechs Lucifer and Ajuka Beelzebub are known Super Devils and will not be used. However, Serafall Leviathan of the Sitri Clan is not only a Maou, but is also a Maou-Class Devil. That would mean that Grayfia is as strong as her. So... yeah... quite powerful! The fact that you have Levy looking at the seal makes a lot of sense especially since her intelligence level is obscenely high and her talent with runes are second to none. As such she would be able to decipher and undo the seal in short order after having analyzed it. The whole, "the seal figured out the loophole" deal is absolute bologna! The only way for it to do so is if Minato redid the sealing to tighten it even further. Also, loving the way this chapter panned out! Looking forward to continue reading it, but it's getting late and I'm getting tired so I must thank you for the good read so far and I hope you're staying well in these troubling times!

Personally I'm of the opinion that Erza and Mira could take on and even defeat Itachi and Kisame. Reasoning? Well allow me to enlighten you. Erza vs. Itachi. Itachi usually uses Fire Style Ninjutsu and supplement it with Shuriken Jutsu which a combination of Flight Armor with Flame Empress Sword will take care of those and even the Sharingan wouldn't help much as her Flight Armor would push her much faster than Itachi would be able to keep up with, not to mention that Itachi was basically blind by the time he and Kisame tried to get Naruto from the beginning. Whilst the Mangekyo would usually be a game changer, Erza has shown time and time again that she has an armor for all situations. Mira vs. Kisame, Kisame is strong of that there is no doiubt, however his main advantage would be to steal the chakra from his opponents which Mira has none. Combine that with her long range advantage as well as aerial advantage? Kisame has no chance. Now for the reverse! Mira vs. Itachi. Again Itachi is mostly blind so the Mangeko is no issue, however his Sharingan would be a problem if it weren't for the fact that Mira has shown capable of being resistant to illusions and hypnosis and even his Fire Style and Shuriken Jutsu are a mute point compared to her more powerful Take Over Forms. Erza vs. Kisame. Much the same with Itachi really. Except all she'd have to do here is put on her Sea Empress Armor and Sea Empress Sword. Kisame's Water Style will be useless and gets redirected back at him. She is also a master swordswoman so Kisame's skill with a blade wouldn't be all that difficult for her to counter. Samehada's sentience would be a game changer usually but again, Magic not Chakra so Samehada wouldn't really be much of a factor. Now his Water Style: Super Water Shark Bomb Jutsu would be a problem usually, but all Erza would have to do is redirect it back at him as she did with Juvia in the S-Class Trials, which she was only a Mid-Class S-Class Mage at that point, but again redirected a chakra draining jutsu back at the user and Kisame gets hit with his own medicine. Now I must point out that I do believe that Itachi and Kisame are indeed powerful, amazing, and utter bada**es worthy of their Rank, but I'm of the opinion that Erza and Mira, two of whom are Fairy Tails strongest Wizards and are consistantly getting much stronger as time progresses. Experience does play a huge role in fights I'll admit and Kisame and Itachi are indeed some of the ones who have the most in their age group even though the Ninja Villages were at a time of peace, but Erza and Mira consistantly are in fights due to Fairy Tail's nature as well as their general rivalry with each other. As such it is my opinion that although Erza and Mira are younger than Itachi and Kisame, their experience is much greater. But hey just something I wanted to put out there. Anyhow, although there will be no NaruhHina in this fanfic, mind you I'm not asking for it, I'm actually rather interested in it. Especially since it uses two of my favorite women of all time, Erza Scarlet and Mirajane Strauss, as summons! Which means that they will make constant appearances! Mind you I find both highly attractive, especially Erza. I remember I told a friend of mine once that if I could I would grope Erza and he said,"Dude, she'd kill you in under a second" and I replied with,"And as I died I would shout out to the world, for everyone to hear, " I regret nothing!" " he then said " Dude you have got to be the craziest guy I know if you would do that" Anyway I'm rambling when all I wanted to do was state my opinion on whether Erza and Mira could defeat Itachi and Kisame. However as you, yourself said, this isn't the canon Erza and Mira, but a different set and that they are far more powerful and more experienced. So now that I have done so I would like to wish you well in life and to wish you to stay safe!

Great story so far; I'm looking to see how this progresses!

I do hope you keep with how 'sacrifice innocents for the cause' Danzo is in Canon and don't try to make him sympathetic. Also, the 'not being able to lead' thing? That's the arguement for making him a special jounin, like Anko, which is below full jounin, not chunin. This reeks of Danzo pulling strings, and acting like he's the one that gets to decide, instead of the Hokage, and she just goes along with it, which is true to Canon and why Tsunade wasn't a good pick for leader, the Third showing himself, once again, to be a fool.

I do enjoy the story so far though!