Oh I am loving this. There’s a bit of me that thinks this might all be a plan God has come up with to actually teach Michael. I might be completely wrong though. It’s just a feeling.

omg boi I cried bro I cried hard and then everything gots oks

Awesome Story!
I just LOVE it!

HOW ARE YOU DOING THIS? NOW I'M NOT EVEN ANGRY AT GOD. LIKE, AT THE BEGINNING, I WAS ALL FOR LUCIFER PUNCHING HIM, AND THEN- ALL FOR LUCIFER HUGGING HIM, TOO. Because just like in that God Johnson episode, Lucifer wants nothing more than an honest apology and his Father's love. Oh Gosh, this was... this was PERFECT. God making Earth home for his children, telling Michael to behave, admitting he did wrong by Lucifer... And Lucifer finally accepting- his new role, the forgiveness, the disappearing of his anger... That was simply wonderful.
This story was amazing. You've moved my feelings so much - breaking my heart for Lucifer over and over again, making me want to punch first Mike, then God, then making me forgive them as well. It was a truly special rollercoaster of feelings and one amazingly thought-through story :). You're a great writer - you know what you want to say in the story, and you have both beautiful descriptions of surroundings and internal monologue, and you have great dialogue as well. Honestly, if you publish a book, I want to buy it :)! That. Was. Awesome. Thank you for a story like that! Wow, one of my favorites of Lucifer! Just... Hats off to you :) :)

ASDFGHJKL! I'm literally speechless, and it's all like: mortals! But- wings?! The fight! Luci's furious! Good for- oh no. Oh no, the glass. Oh shit.. Even I don't want him to die- God?! Like- OH NO. SOMEONE PUNCH DAD STRAIGHT IN THE FACE, LUCIFER, COME ON, I'M COUNTING ON YOU. Jesus, one of his sons lies dead on the floor, he didn't react at all when Uriel was killed, he plays with his children like with toys, wtf. I like Michael now, but now I hate their Father :D

Oh nooooooo, I have so many feelings after that chapter! So. Many!
First - Chloe taking everything so well, I loved that! I really hated what the writers did with her in the show, even letting her actually attempt to poison Lucifer's drink :(. Drink belonging to someone she's known for four years as someone kind, childlike, protective and with some past trauma :(. Her reaction here was much more believable, especially since they were in a hurry and had to deal with kidnapping of Ella. I really loved it :). Ofc, I also loved Luci's rambling xd
Then - the fight and Michael defeating Cain with the sword just like he does defeat Satan in all those old paintings :D. Such a nice touch, and congrats, Mikey xd. You did great xd
And least, but not last - Lucifer and his protective, self-sacrificing nature, making him deciding to go to Heaven, so the humans he cares about could be safe. Ahhh, my poor heart :( :(!
Uh-oh, what's wrong, Mikey? Maybe it was all Dad's test? Still, what a manipulative bastard :D

Oh, how the tables have turned :D :D Would you believe that this time in the Michael vs Pierce fight I'm actually rooting for Mike for a change xD? What happened to me, ahahah :D
But yeah, Mikey needs to snap Pierce's neck for kidnapping Ella, but not before breaking his every bone. Ugh, Cain, you asshole... Oh! And how is Chloe going to react to the angel wings?! I'm so excited!

Oh no, I had that feeling that Lucifer's clever plan was going to backfire at him xDD I'm honestly both worried for Ella, and also dying here, laughing, because most of Lucifer's plans always backfire at him xDDD It's like, he really is so smart and clever and crafty, but he has nothing on his comic self :D. That Lucifer could out-manipulate everyone xD I remember reading the first book, and he was mortal in one story, naked and vulnerable, and a powerful creature was told to kill him. Luci talked her into letting [i]him[/i] kill her xDD. But! I actually prefer our Lucifer to his original version, because this one is emotional, caring, sweet, yearning for friends and family, while the one in the comics is just.. well.. I guess he cares about Maze sometimes, and that'd be it xD He's very cold and calculated. Still funny/sarcastic, tho xd
Oh, and I'm still all for Lucifer and Michael working together to get Ella back to safety! Like, they have a common enemy now, and I finally see them as brothers :D. So amazing!

I'm so bursting with pride right now! (Lucifer's amazing when he fights and protects!) Hahah, and this it was all it took for me to finally start warming up to Michael :D. He was perfectly human in that chapter, already attached to Ella, and understanding that maybe their Dad wasn't all that good. Which meant that maybe Lucifer wasn't all that evil either. Oh, and maybe he finally learns to respect our good little ol' Luci :D :D
And then they can form a brotherly bond :D What happened with me, hahah xd I actually want them to make up and patch things up xDD Maybe because Lucifer finally fought back and leveled the playing field xD or maybe because you're a brilliant writer :D!

Omg, omg, omg, omg, OMG! GO LUCIFER! YOU BEAUTIFUL FALLEN BIRDIE, YOU! I literally jumped up in the chair when he punched Michael :D :D :D Omg, that was soo sooooo satisfying. First with our loyal, fierce Maze, protecting Lucifer from his older brother, then with Lucifer finally standing up for himself (and for Ella xD). And Mikey being terrified? Serves him right :D
(but I also wanted to say that I actually enjoyed Michael and Lucifer working on the case together this time xd Detective Devil was awesome, and even that smack was more brotherly this time :D sweet :D!)

Ah, Ella finally got her ride :D! I remember her in 4x01, asking Lucifer if Amenadiel would give her a ride, haha xD so wishes do come true! As for Mikey, on one hand I'm smiling at how much he missed Ella's company and how sweet are they together, and on the other hand he has to say something about teaching Lucifer his place, and now I'm frustrated with him all over again :D :D

That last sentence was absolutely great. I love how Lucifer allowed himself that bit of confidence :). And the whole chapter with Ella was amazing! Ella is such a ray of sunshine, always seeing good in everyone and everything. Her positive attitude is truly inspiring :)
Your Lucifer is perfect in every sense of the world - I can feel him yearning for affection and connections through the words :)
Ah, and his talk with Pierce was quite brilliant! Leave it to our clever Devil to always have a plan, no :D? I hope it won't backfire, haha xd

That comment about 'his last name being his first name' reminded me that Lucifer can also be translated not only as the bringer of light, but also as the morning star, and now I'm wheezing because hello there, Morningstar Morningstar, you're the Moon Moon of Hell xDDDDDD
Anyway :D! Back to the chapter xd I loved it! Loved the fight, and while Pierce couldn't get to Mike with his fists, he still did it with his words. And he's, like, half right. Michael's no better than Lucifer, but I still firmly believe that Lucifer is better than Michael because he rarely fights back against his brothers. Even at that beach with Amenadiel, eh. And Mikey? Tsk, tsk. So maybe Pierce will help him open his eyes and see himself for what he truly is ;) (so, like, abusive little prick xD)

Lucifer finally got his Mafia case :D! I absolutely adore how you manage to write the cases and keep them entertaining at the same time! Not even the writers of the show can do that sometimes xd Lucifer is so endearingly innocent and sweet here around Chloe and away from his brother :) and I loved that "you most certainly would" comment, because, let's be honest, YES, haha :D

I'm here in my cheerleader's outfit, just jumping up and down while yelling, "Pierce! Pierce! Pierce!" :D I know he's not doing it for Lucifer, but, well, at this point I'll take all possible kicking of Michael's ass xDD