Interesting Fic, I honestly hope you update this soon.

Fun is fun and this is fun. Thanks for writing this, and bye for now.

So love the story thought id point out sometjing to help with the stories flow. So Taylors moms alive and a sekirie so was is it that taylor is adopte? Why not simplg have it shes a new generation of sekiries after all with out MBI theirs a good chance that maya released them at a slower pace and in smaller numbers after all. So Talyors mom would have to be in the 1-10 for this to work even.
Or maybe you fixed this and clean it up more later.

Love this story so far keep it up and ill keep on readin!

If her mom was alive, Taylor doesn’t have to be adopted. Unless you’re going with Sekirei and Ashikabi not being able to have biological children?

Would be strange though as no specie would survive if they’re destined to find mates they can’t have children with.

I have started reading several of your stories now.
In my opinion you are a very good writer, one of the problems i have is that you have so many startups that you do not follow up on.
I hope that you will learn to focus yourself to continue some of your works to completion.
Beyond that i believe that i am looking at a promising writer.

The profile of said writer is an other problem entirely, basicly an compilation or novel in its own right.
Better to copy-paste it to a story if you want to keep that.
A profile should present You as writer to those unfamilliar to you, it should tell others who you are.
What u have as a profile now is an abomination.

I hope that u will take my words as the constructive advice i intend it to be, as i will be following your work from now on.
Be seeing you!

Was reading your stories and just found this one and can only say that it was damn good you made a really cohesive world and a real good story , but now i want moar soon.

Binged it love it cant wait till next chapter!

Maya's actually a 12 or 13 one of those I'm not sure witch basically translates to do not fuck with this person unless you can punch an endbringer in the face and getaway with it and even then you probably shouldn't

Please more chapters this is the best story of worm please dont give up

This is a good fix fic for Worm. Keep up the excellent work. My favorite change has to be Uzume and Sabah being a quiet lesbian fashion duo who no one has tried recruiting so far in story.

I hope you come back to this story, it seems interesting and I hope it doesn't get left to the side to be forgotten.

update please

Color me interested, Thanks for Writing!

I have one important thing to say. MOAR seriously this has been amazing to read update it soon plz

I liked the chapter.