ayy, good lucks on ur exams

Hello again! I'm a tad late with this one but I do have a few things to say. First, what a twist! The introduction of Minako caught me off guard but is a pleasant surprise. I liked how Naoto is slowly deducing what the Link Ups are, as well as his hypotheses on how they all connect. Unlike last chapter, I think that Naoto's inner monologue fit quite well here. As there are more questions popping up, it's only natural a detective like himself would ponder what is going on around him.

Good chapter and excellent character writing, keep it up!

No question this chapter, I think I'll save them to be answered later.

Hello again. First: good chapter, I liked that you changed up the dialogue for the rank ups (even if it came as quite the surprise and raised more questions lmao) so that it fit more with the Fortune Arcana. I think that Naoto's inner dialogue carried on a tad too long in the beginning but it fit the character well so I didn't see too much of a problem. I'm excited to see what you do with Minato!

Overall, good chapter and character writing. Keep up the good work!

Question of the chapter: Is Naoto going to be a Wild Card?

Naoto & your OC are too good for Persona 3, just get rid of minato and replace him with Tidus from Final Fantasy X since he's better.

(though it's not that hard to be a better character than minato)

Nice chapter, will Naoto be filling Makoto's roll and become the messiah instead?

This story seems like a very interesting take on Persona 3. I enjoyed the first chapter quite a bit, and I hope you keep up the good work!

Question: Will Minato/Makoto have a major roll in this fic or will Naoto pretty much be taking over his roll?