Sorry but I wanted to like this story. I just don't see the potential at all. But great effort!

I can't say that this is a great chapter because of so much anger, so much despair they are all feeling. Mark is pushing and fighting with Addison, but only to make her realize how her actions can traumatize Emmerson and even himself and Amelia.

Emmerson is going through so much. All his entire life he could only count on Addison, so every time she "disappears" the poor child must feel shear panic.

Derek: Jail! I feel a little sorry for Meredith, her son and the baby, but he is an animal. In no time he was going to hurt them too. But for Addison and Emmerson safety he must be condemned to jail for a long time. Kidnapping, repeatledly rape, assault, murder of a newborn baby, just to mention some of his crimes .

Wow this story is just wow. A totally different Addison. It is interesting though. I just hope she will be strong enough to overcome this. It is hard to picture Addison as a woman who would let herself be treated so horribly. It is a thought I really needed to get used to when I started reading. Phew.

No Addison! For your and Emmerson's safety you will not drop the charges. I hope Mark will not let her do it. As in testifying I hope the judge will be resonable and let her testify without Derek's presence in the court. Is unimaginable the kind of evilness needed to hurt a newborn baby the way Derek did.

Meredith is being selfish, naive, stupid and everything in between. A man who did what Derek did to Addison is going to turn on her new wife and her son in no time. And at his first rage atack, she is gonna regret what she is doing now,

On other note, the story your other reviewer mean was: The Karma by RulerOfAllThatIsEvilChiFlowers

Update soon

Oh my goodness...can Meredith really be that stupid. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and hope Derek gets exactly what he deserves!

i love this so much. i like that Addison and Emerson is out of the room. thank you i hope more to come.

TeamMerder,
Thank you for your concern. Derek has always been the “bad guy” in this story. I am not sure what you are referring to, because even as early as chapter one she references him by name. Maybe you are getting my story confused with someone else’s? If you are the same TeamMerder who was on my other comment section I just have one question. If you know you do not like my writing style why continue to read?

I liked the Original version of this story where Addison is taken in by a Really bad guy and Derek is NOT the villain. You certainly have a vicious and vivid imagination and I for on,have found better stories to read on this site.
I think you are a teen ager who has No concept of real life or the true characters of Grey's. Write on- I certainly won't be reading anymore of this Crap...
Charlotte
Team MerDer

please Update soon

Omg have read to the last chapter...love this story.
Can’t wait for the next chapter

Well written . Please write more

Noooooooooooooooo! You can not stop here! I think the woman is Meredith. The code is, maybe, the birthdate of Addison's daughter that didn't die like Emmerson's constant coments seams to indicate and that Derek and Meredith adopt. Please update as soon as you can!

ending on a cliffhanger... that's mean. but woah, this chapter was exciting. Already so different from the novel (or movie) but still with the same concept.
I'm not entirely sure if the woman she sees is real or a hallucination. if she's real I guess probably Meredith figured something out (because as Derek said she's not working the night shift anymore)

please Update soon