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It’s so cool! I love this so much!

lovely! you capture the inner life of the characters so well. mob is touchingly wholesome, teru is hilarious and sweet. I'm enjoying this story so much, and I really look forward to reading more of your work!

Oh man I love this fic to peices

Oh, man, this story was amazing!
I absolutely loved the 2 chapters that you offered. It was quite interesting to see what would happen if Mob was more accepting to violence. I now see that it probably would've been the same sorta but just sped up.
I love how you do the inner monologues of the characters, what kinda thoughts they have the insecurities, all that sorta stuff, we also get a glimpse of what's going on sorta in the background, which is fun.
I honestly feel so sorry amd can relate with Mob for being misunderstood a lot, and for being sort of unable to say his feelings out, which I can definitely relate to. This is honestly an amazing chapter you've written here!
I love the small comedy tid bits you put in as well, for example in the ending, where the Mob and Tezu are talking about someone special, and Tezu thinks he's talking about him and it's pretty obvious you would usually think that, but then he mentions someone different. Hilarious! Especially, when Tezu says to swap numbers, and Mob's just conpletely clueless. Oh, my god! I can definitely see a scene happening like, you've got his personality to a point!

Anyway, I'll stop here. This was amazing. Loved it!

I like it. Hope you continue to write when you feel like doing so.