SUPER AWESOME!

Maybe Dorothy would end up in Bryson's world?

Brilliant!

Perfect!

Excellent chapter!

Nice work!

Awesome chapter!
Maybe the real Ozma could give Bryson some of her power, and the combined power of him, Dorothy and Theodora could destroy the slipper shard?

I hope that Dorothy and Bryson end up together this time!
I do feel sorry for Theodora though.
Remember, "Adventure is out there!"

Noting my hopes and predictions on a story which I quite frankly viewed with a bit of distaste for the fact that you've unnecessarily brought war and mass destruction to Oz(something I never do in my own Oz writings)...

- A humiliated Dorothy, possibly by way of some kind of physical transformation wrought by Rabadan(which could easily be undone by Glinda afterwards). I'd suggest some kind of timid animal, but it's your story. This would seriously motivate Bryson to realize that Rabadan is a rotter that's gotta go.

- Undo ALL of the damage. Bring back everyone that was lost. EVERYONE. Just wipe the Oz slate clean of anything remotely resembling war.

- Leopards don't change their spots. Get rid of those witches. Theodora, Evanora. GONE. Banishment or death. There are SOOOO many other villains Baum has created which have gone unused in modern Oz stories. They deserve to be used again. Removing the witches won't remove other threats that Baum has chronicled. I push this propensity in my own stories here.

Amazing Chapter!

Excellent Chapter! Very...mystical.

Perfect Chapter!

Excellent chapter!

Brilliant chapter!

Perfect Chapter!