Well, This is Very disappointing as Guardian-players. [ unexpected sighing ]

(Not to mention the long waited update schedules just for this to come up. Talk about to just add insult to injury there, no?...) [ tired shrug calming ]

Keep up whatever comes next, perhaps? [ tries to lighten up ]

Well first Happy Birthday! Second Holy Crap that Exotic sounds so freaking OP...I want one please*I show you(the author) some Strange Coins* and we know a little more of Iron Lord Oz, man he really is disconeted if he doesnt know about the SIVA and what do you mean with burried? And what will you do considering the new info of Shin Malphur aka Dredgen Vale?if my memorie serves right, we know that he carries his legendary Last Word but he will also have his Thorn?

This. This might be the start of something amazing. Write on Guardian!

(Review for Chapter 02): Well then Soldier. Be Brave and Have Faith. [ Sighing ]

Darn, yes, now Ozpin and Shin are two Lightbearing Guardians protecting Remnant. As for Remnant...

Shin, Ozpin, Salem, Timor...All of which are of Destiny (IF Salem is a native to Destiny). The Remnants are truly clueless of what is coming into their Shores, and are not prepared to join in the Light-Dark War of ours...

How would Former Iron lord Ozpin played out with RWBY's Lore though? Is he still involved with that reincarnation thing that the canon-Ozpin has? Making deals with Remnant's supernatural beings to fit in, or him staying only as raw Destiny-centered? (I.e: Lightbearer only without any of Remnant's mystic powers).

By the LORD...

Ex-Warlord Ozpin alright. [ Chuckling ]

So this story was connected in (sorry I forgot all about it, but I still remembered it if its the same one)... [ Thought Come Together! ]

Also, he said 'Iron lord' (meaning Shin). Heh, a bit out from the recent Sol news right Ozpin? [ Says To No One ]

And also not familiar with the Golden Gun ability. I can't imagine 2nd Dark Age Hunters having to only wield Arc and Void, while us Titans and Warlocks can practice All Three of the Light Energies (a certain Sunbreaker Warlord trying to best against Felwinter...Didn't end well, both for the Risen and his Ghost) during that time. Before Shin I mean, and in killing Yor probably before Twilight Gap.

Keep it up.

Normally a Very powerful Golden Gun would've Atomized Huntsmen or Guardian-like (except...they're not Guardians) beings in Remnant, Directly I mean. However, be sure to have Shin and any incoming Guardians 'lower' their Light when facing Huntsmen like Ruby and Glynda there.

They (most of them anyways) are like us Guardians (Remnant's version anyways), and no one likes to have Guardians having to kill Huntsmen who are in Ozpin's side right now (at least not yet if you're planning to make Shin an 'anti-hero' in this part).

SHIT! A REAL Dredgen has born, Ozpin and Shin Malphur must make an allience if the want that Remnant survive, if there wasnt a reason for Shin to stay now there is one

I take it that Ozpin doesn’t know about FGuatdians!?

An interesting story. I’m be eager to see where it leads.

please update this, it's not everyday you see a destiny story using characters from the lore, so keep it alive!

great story please write more

this fic has pretty interesting story and I can't wait for chp-2

Seems good so far but I'm still not sure. I guess I'll wait till the next chapter.

Shin Malphur, or the man with the golden gun, is holding back so much.
I like it

Enjoyed the first chapter. Excited for more!