I read this as the BATB story. Do u plan to continue it!

Seems like a great start and can't wait for more!

SUPER excited for this one!

Oh I can't wait for more

I cannot wait to see where you take this to see it unfold...this is a good start though!
It's captivating, intense, heartbreaking...

Not all is what it seems...Carlisle and Charlie are or were uncover or are they spy's but for who? Who are they working for that compromised there cover and put them in danger. I know that Charlie trusts Carlisle and told Bella to seek them out to protect her. What now? She is going to put them in danger too, just by being there. You can see that Carlisle, Esme, and Edward love her. Kate is going to be a problem and possibly be a sell out a rat taking her own family down unless she is handled from the start. She is resentful over what happened to their lives since the fire took place you know damn well she hates Bella then and especially now for returning.

Wow! Awesome chapter, can’t wait to see where this goes.

Amazing story

What in the world did Charlie uncover?
Poor Bella and Renee. Poor everyone for that matter.

Edward loved Bella so much that he risked his life for her. It looks like he may have to again to keep her alive.

Wow! Looking forward to more.

Ooh, I need more! Since this isn't marked complete I can only hope you plan to continue this. Please do. I'm intrigued by the backstory. Who was Charlie running from and why? Why was his family almost destroyed? And what about Edward and his family. Could they risk their safety to help Bella? I'm glad Edward and his Little Bell are reunited.

Great writing, hope you continue this story! Thanks for sharing.

Tied in knots. Can't wait for updates.

She’s all grown up now, Eddie Bear.

So much heartache and loss. Why would people talk smack about a hero? Simple minded idiots.
I'm guessing that Bella is 17/18, but how old is Edward?
Looking forward to more.
Happy New Year!