I'm curious if you will be continuing this story

Love it, can't wait to read more!

Incest is best when you put your sister to the test.

Love the idea of this story. Takami is starting off here on sort of the right foot, though her eventual reaction to Minato and Yukari once they get together should be interesting. Accepting something intellectually is one thing, but it happening in truth may be another. And Yahan seems like she will be an interesting addition. I wonder how Miya will deal with her vulgarities. Though, Miya does seem to be a little less uptight in your story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh shit... this is really good really hope for more! Really nice reading! xD

this story is pretty good. i pray that this story does not die and is updated soon.

I love it! this is so great, I want to read more!

Yeah, I can see that being depressing in this regard. Still, hilarious to read. This is pretty cool so far, lots of potential.

What!? I only just found this story in your list, I am disappointed in myself. Think I will love seeing your take on this series.

s/12119851/6/The-Dragon-and-the-Huntress

Well this story premise was interesting.
I had to admit that never liked Yukari not even a little, guess that should have paid more attention to the pairing instead of just the summary now Minato is involved with Yukari despite that they could be considered siblings, this is where I stop.
Do liked what you did with Minato as someone who was created by technology rather than conceived the natural way, it make him really different compared to other stories.
Not a fan of the sexual themes since prefer to read the stories for the changes mades to the plot and characters compared to canon..

Good luck with the story though.

Takami: THAT FUCKER... Excuse me for a couple of minutes I will be right back sweetie.
Yukari: Mom don't do anything rash
Takami: Don't worry nothing bad will happen ever again and all I have to do is stab your worthless manipulative piece of shit father to death, plus I'll have a lot more time off work

Also not all Sekirei bonds are romantic in nature as it is stated in Canon that Uzume for example felt like a protective older sister to her ashikabi

Because she's your sister mostly, same father, same mother, just with a little extra oomph

Also for the love of god, please keep Minato's flock and Yukari separate

Ok chapter 4 clarified 3 no further questions your honor...beyond when well get the next chapter of course. Joking.

Overall you know what I think of your writing, excellent story premise and interactions and even if the fic is fledgling right now it was still a fun binge. Though it has kept me up till three, but thats better than four like I've been the last few nights.

Thanks for the read!