This is a pretty great story I stumble upon and would love to see you continue it.

I would like to see Rei Todoroki in the Harem as well if you could please

This is a nice start can't wait to see what else happens next

Love it thus far can’t wait for more

La Brava for harem and good first chapter.

My friend aside from Naruto Jaegerjaquez, I've read at least three other really great fics, but none of them go past 3 chapters.

Great chapter and please update soon.

Please continue

Soo. Is the title a reference to squad 10 captain toshiro hitsugiyas shikai realese phrase? Cause that's rain over the frosted heavens.

I really can't wait for the next chapter and hope you release it soon. Really enjoyed reading this fan fic and can't wait to read more of it. I also believe a female Haku would work well and a cousin to Naruto and a member of his Harem since they would both have a form of control over Ice and would be able to help each other with different techniques they could make to get closer to each other but have her in class 1-b since not many of the characters from that class have been revealed so she would fit in.

Atualiza, por favor.

Great chapter and please update whenever you can.

Really like this story please continue

Great chapter and please update soon.

Okay, so fair warning, this review might come off as very harsh. This is not because I'm trying to be mean or that I believe the story is horrible. More that it is not living up to its potential and I want to help. So let me be blunt.

This story isn't going to work as it is now. There is one problem that is holding it back in many respects, and that is the ridiculously large harem. It is beyond imagining, and there is no way you can write a story with one that size and have it be good. If you continue with plans with the harem at that size, this story will never get finished and will simply be one of those "what if" stories that could have been good. Why am I so confident in this take? Because literally no study has ever been successful with a harem that large. It's just not possible, and already the issues with it are showing. The girls/women become shallow imitations of themselves with little personality or purpose besides standing there to blush at the main hero and fantasize about him while being described based mostly on their sexual attractiveness.

You have a truly unique and intriguing idea in the form of Naruto's background and quirk. I would implore you to reconsider the harem, cut it to 8-10 girls at the most, and rally around the highly creative idea you started with to craft what this story could be, which is very good. The most important tool in an writers arsenal is restraint, and it would do this story a lot of good in regards to the harem.