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Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2019 Great story! |
PrisonBreakFan08 chapter 1 . 1/14/2019 Loved newly established Darvey. Loved the banter between Donna and Harvey as well as between Donna and Harvey's mother. An angst free story that makes you feel good inside: thank you for that! |
jendarveyx chapter 1 . 1/2/2019 Perfect and adorable, I loved it! Xxx |
Specter-Paulsen chapter 1 . 12/28/2018 This is so much fun! I love all the Specter teasing. Thanks Santa! |
AnonymousDH chapter 2 . 12/28/2018 “The one that’s telling me a whole lot more than you are..” this line, so Donna. So them. Shdjjsjs I love how shy is is about asking her to join his mother and then ends up blurting it out just like that.. “I can’t wait to tell your mom she raised a submissive son.” I AM SCREAMING Harvey bantering with his mom the second he sees her and Donna just watching them hug and joining in on it. “I love her already.” THIS IS CANON SHSJSJ I MEAN SO SURE SHE DOES “Remind me to show you his baby pictures.” Shhdjsjsjaja I would pay to see this on the show DONNA AND MARCUS making fun of Harvey is all I need, this is so effortless and it ending with Marcus asking if he’s gonna marry her dhsjsjajsk This fic is pure perfection shsjkaa all the relationships.. The first steps picture and Harvey not walking for another week. That is so him I’m laughing, this is the kind of detail I live for in fics. Perfection The baby talk and Donna feeling a bit uneasy about it after having teased Harvey about it shsjsjsjja Lily thanking Donna... I neeeeeeeed this so much A VIDEO OF HARVEYS FIRST SCHOOL PLAY SHSJSJSJJAJAJA Ugh the Gordon mention, my eyes are glossy too The talk at the end shsjsjaj This fic is pure perfection and I’ll reread it plenty. Thanks for writing it |
TeremosCoisasBonitasParaContar chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 Can't describe in words how much I enjoyed reading this. You captured both characters beautifully! So cute! This was really reeeeally good. |
notnotkirbyspecter chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 The dialogues! Damn! I could so hear them! This was so them! So in character. I love it when the writer knows them well! And everyone making fun of Harvey, i loved that I loved Lily here too. I wish we could see more of her on the show This was amazingly written! What a fun read! Thank you for this! |
Nannalyn chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 Thank you for this lovely fic! All the dialogue felt so vivid and with the descriptions I can see everything coming alive before my eyes! I loved all the banter, Donna and Lily's talk, and especially the last scene when they are alone again. Very well done! |
Jessicaa1567 chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 SO CUTE |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 I loved it, Merry Christmas xxx |
krystalsteph chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 Very cute. Loved all the Darvey banter |
carlota206 chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 Awesome Christmas story! Loved it! :D |
Follow-ur-Shadow chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 This was perfect! :) |
Rose4darvey chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 Aww that was just the sweetest story. Perfect for Christmas. Thank you so much. Loved Donna meeting his family. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 That was so sweet and fun. Thank you so much for writing! |