Toka? Whose the mother of of toka?

How many children did Kamijou have? I mean aren't there too many? Plus how long do you plan to continue this fanfiction, it looks like you plan for a long series

Ya know,I'd like to see more of Touma's kids being...well,kids.
More of a reminder that despite all the scheming and manipulation (that would certainly deserve some major Illusion Braking),that they are in their late teens...and should act as such...well,from time to time.
Touma really needs a vacation sometime...but this sure as hell won't be the universe that he gets it hahahah.
Also,Touma really needs to stop sticking his dick in crazy,as I'm sure he already has one Kihara under his spell...a salute to this misfortunate bastard.
By the way,what happened to Imagine Breaker after Touma's passing? Maybe irrelevant to the plot,but just a curiosity.
That vending machine withstood the full force of The One Who Exorcises Demons And Purifies God?!
Vending machine Magic God confirmed!
"I can't possibly have been hospitalized that many times to be given my own personal room! I refuse! I refuse to accept such a depressing reality!"
Sadly,that hope is an illusion to be shattered.
Touma's self-loathing is born out of experience...and hypocrisy. If he saw that in anyone else he would immediately try to dispel that mindset...and yet he clings to it himself. If that isn't hypocrisy I don't know what is. I look forward to the day his illusions are shattered to pieces.
... Really Kamijou Touma?! Really?!
Mugino?!
I pray to your survival,even though Imagine Breaker will negate it.

First review for this story since I haven't quite found this gem yet. Stellar grammar and phrasing as usual, makes for an easy if long read, with only some spelling mistakes every now and then. Honestly stories like this one are without doubt my favorite due to me not needing an entire minute just to understand one paragraph.

I can see why it took you this long to update, Kamachi being the madman that he is continues to add more and more to the world of Toaru. Let's hope that whatever that he adds doesn't mess up your update schedule too much. But I admit that for me the start of GT is already way better than NT's start, we get great reveals and hype fights from the get go compared to the rather tame NT 1 and 2. Will you add characters like Anna and Maidono early as cameos? Not that I won't appreciate you adding them early but I think it's better to wait for more info.

Love the premise here but I'm not sure how exactly a single Magic God was able to beat Touma who had learned to use IT and control IB to its fullest extent. Unless of course said enemy was born from Touma's own regrets which may be the reason, losing to himself.

Hmmm, for the first scene I guess that is Touma's son with a Kihara. I'm thinking that while he has that 'for science' mentality he also has some of Touma's qualities so he shouldn't go too far without good reason especially so when it comes to family.

Lol at Touma for losing to another vending machine but... Yay more Junko. Having the less focused characters take the stage is always good. Really though loved how you actually included someone like her interacting with Touma. Makes for a fun dynamic that should have been in the main series, since she's Misaki's number 2. I have the same opinion as well though, if there is anyone deserving of happiness it's someone like Touma but I can see just how hard it is to make him understand that. Honestly I know it'll still be awhile before Kamachi gives Touma any hope of lasting happiness but its frustrating seeing him go through so much shit in just a short amount of time.

Nice of the doctors to update Touma's room into the Kamijou Ward already. Junko trying to help both Touma and Misaki reconnect even if it is currently useless at the moment was sad and heartwarming at the same time. Good gods anytime I see Misaki showing up makes my heart wrench due to how unfair their relationship ended, stop torturing them already Kamachi, really wish Ayu gets a chance to redeem herself in the upcoming volumes as well. Misaki entrusting Touma's safety to Junko and her reply gives all sorts of feelings, the good kind to be exact. Wonder how Misaki will react when she meets her son if she finds out another powerful mental esper is manipulating some events around Touma.

Seems as though Touma's still has a lot of regrets so having another reliable companion in Junko should help him along in the days to come. Combined with his glass cannon saint daughter and he should be able to get stronger with Junko helping along in science side problems and Angela for the magic side.

Seems trouble is already brewing, but of course it would be. I can't help but believe this magician is somehow connected to Tsuchi. With the sis-con tendencies and a blonde spiky haired person reacting to their magic.

And what's this? Yomikawa! Here to protect her students. Thank you for including her in this SS as well as now being involved with Touma. It always bothered me that she was only vaguely connected to Touma as his P.E. teacher when she could be so much more. I mean I understand that Accelerator needed her support more than Touma due to Touma's incredible mental fortitude, but I really wish she would have known about Touma's situation since its her job to help children in need and is perfectly willing to do it. See even she thinks Touma's luck is BS. Ooohh, shots fired by the good doctor, Yomikawa's fired up; really wish anti-skill is enough for this incident. Touma really needs the chance to rest, heck he shouldn't always be the hero something I'm sure his children are willing to fill in for their father's sake.

Heaven Canceller and his hospital staff is Touma's best support. Always there to help him after he is injured, loving the nurses and their propensity to getting physical when it concerns Touma. Now for a joke theory, I believe the magic god of ruin was only able to kill Touma in the future is because Heaven Canceller already died of old age. Anyway really enjoying the quirky support staff.

And now for the last part. Did Touma NTR Hamazura by taking away Mugino? If so that's both sad and hilarious since I know Hamazura is only ever attracted to Takitsubo. I'm currently speculating when the future children will blurt out their secret but I know it would take awhile for the truth to be revealed, they're really pushing it since a lot of them keep calling Touma their dad. Since Kaen is part of ITEM will he stop the infamous FRE/NDA incident or let it happen? Since it was important for Hamazura's and Mugino's development. Seems as though some of Touma's children are not as affected by the magic god's hate curse or is it just a select few being afflicted by it.

Without question one of the most important things I want to know is about Maria. Seems as though Aleister was able to regain his/her dead female body while maintaining Coronzon's, since Maria has characteristics from both mothers.

Incredible read as always, my only large worry is the fact that you have to juggle a lot of characters; with the introduction of the future children adding to the already large amount of characters in the novels, some characters may end up getting forgotten. Personally wish everyone gets a chance to shine but I understand if this doesn't happen since this is already a problem in the novels. Here's hoping you'll be able to do justice to the forgotten characters of the novels.

Looking forward to the next one and hopefully it will come faster since your on a roll again.

It’s not that i hate OC character but since Toaru had a really huge character roster to remember, i feel like adding oc with it just making it complicated. And also i just want to reminded that IT and dragons are to different being and it’s possible IT is not the strongest being in Touma hand since when IT appeared againts Fiamma, it said something with more bigger power suppressed it.

To ArmouredCoreNineBall: was that nurse thicc? I thought she was a little less than that, didn't know.

And so things return to a small bit of normal... for now.

Junko becoming fast friends with Touma is honestly rather heartwarming. If ignorance can be a shield to the Kami-Yan disease, then he might actually have a proper female friend! Of course, Misaki's cameo here is just as fun, too; I'm very into it. And it seems someone is coming for Kamijou, and we see more of, what we can assume, is the extended family of Touma, along with a thicc nurse. I'm down, dude!

It's a good chapter for a good return. Welcome back, my friend!

Sincerely,
ArmoredCoreNineBall, your friendly (not)robotic (not)overlord (possibly)person who occasionally writes things.

Honestly. This is a flimsy conclusion with tons of holes, but I say that Toka is Aisa's daughter.

I really don't know if Gemstone Esper can pass their abilities to their children. But considering that Gemstones preceded Magicians and Espers and that Gemstone bloodline isn't a thing. So yeah... it is possible that Toka can be her daughter.

How I reached that conclusion, you say?

Well, I noticed that Kamijou's children appear in the same order his women appear:

Angela and Index.
'Aleister' and Maria. *Seriously. Fuck you. You forced me to call Aleister as Kamijou's woman*
Toka and Aisa.
Hana and Mikoto.
Kaen and Mugino.
Hachi and Misaki.

There are some holes. As 2 other kids appeared with Hachi, one of them being Birdway's child and some Kihara's child. Which they didn't appear.

So I can't say, I am 100% sure.

Yet, I would still guess.

I was uncertain going into a story involving Touma's time-traveling children, but I have been sold! Your original arc was great, especially the way it meshed elements of canon arcs, like Level Upper and Skill-Out Uprising. The dynamic between Touma, the members of Skill-Out he encounters, and especially Mila were all fantastically done and I'm quite curious to see how him being involved with the lives of characters such as Hamazura and Frenda will change future events.

I also find it curious how a few of his kids have already encountered their mothers. (I really want to Accelerator's daughter meet him before the conclusion of the Sisters arc, cause that should be really interesting.) I mean, Angela is the obvious one, but I'm quite certain that Kaen is Mugino's kid and I really want Toka's mother to be Saten. (Probably isn't, but I can hope. Maybe I already forgot who it really is.) But then, I already know he has more than a dozen kids from the future, so all of the first time encounters should be interesting when they finally come to pass.

Looking forward to the next chapter. I believe that once Kamijou is out of the hospital, we'll be moving into the Sisters arc since that's the next major event. His reunion with Mikoto should be quite amusing, especially if her son (or better, Kuroko's kid apparently) end up involved as well.

Can just update your other stories
you said that you already had some chapters done

I know you didn't write this but... IT's HORRIBLE! THE WORST THING EVER MADE!

Awww. Poor Kamiko. She must have taken the death of future Touma very hard. ;-;
Surprised the others allowed her to tag along considering her age.

That beginning part is both interesting and odd. Cant tell if its one of Touma's kids or not.

Yomikawa my dear, its only a matter of time before you fall 'ill' too. XD

P.S: Ignore the dumb guest reviews. They only care about themselves and not you. We the actual fans and readers care and know it takes time to write updates. :)

Hope to see you again soon pal.

Oh goodness, this is such a good fic!

Well, this is a pretty nice time-travelling fic. Especially the parts about the future kids of Touma. What was the list again?
Index, Mikoto, Meltdowner, and Seirei is what I remember from when it was last updated. And there are still more to come! Especially since there are over 10,000 girls still pinning after him.

To be honest, this fic does not agree with me over a few facts. Mainly the somewhat complicated plot. Since the time-traveling make s for a good plot, the kids interacting with their father, makes it even better. But, the number of kids make it a real pain to figure if the story is going in a good direction, or a bad direction. But, that does not make it a bad fic in the slightest. To quote a certain golden retriever: If I had to choose between like and dislike, it would be like. If I had to choose between good and evil, I would choose moderately evil, with hints of good.

good to see you're alive.

And for those who don't know of my new updating schedule, I'll explain. Updates will come a certain order, starting from Multiplayer, A Huntsman's Awakening, A Jaune of All Trades, and A Certain Influx of Time Traveling Misfits. So, we'll have to wait until next month for an update.

Fuck this I’m out