Nooo, I wanted to know what happend in the hotel room :(

Ruby being a huge slut is just so far OOC that there should have been an AU warning.

Question; assuming you dont explain it later in this fic, when exactly does this take place in the series?

take ur time, i doubt people would mind waiting just a little

I loved reading this story. It was very well put together in my opinion and the characters felt like real people. It makes me very sad that this wonderful addition to this world hasn't updated in so long

Loved it! Can’t wait for more soon!

Ok, screw this. I can't get past how ooc Ruby is. I know that she is hurting, and I could excuse one one night stand, but three?! Seriously? Ruby really doesn't seem like the type to me whatsoever (not that there is anything wrong with it, it just isn't her character). This has potential, and I wish you luck, but I cannot stay for this.

Good chapter.

Good chapter. Insecure Weiss is always fun, and Pyrrah feeling jealous of Ruby's abilities is an intesting twist.

Good chapter. Glad she's going back to Beacon soon.

This was uncomfortable to read. Really not a fan of the OC, especially since she basically took advantage of Ruby (who is a minor). Really disturbing. I'll continue becuase therest of this has shown promise, but that was very gross.

Good start.

Awsome work my friend! Looking forward to the next chapter!3

Very good chapter and yeah I really want Wiss's dad to die

So yeah the where a few mistakes that I saw but over all it did not detach from the story so no real problems there, and I love where you are going with this and the whole sliver eye thing I hope you show Ruby gaining more control with it over time and how you are progressing the relationship between Ruby and Wiss is great though a bit fast but with them being young it is to be a bit expected, though with Wiss getting help with her problems is a very nice touch and shows great development on her part and shows great promise for the future of your story