Nice bit of conflict w/the spillage accident. Solid mystery w/Sofia asking Cedric to go outside.
edit find: as she (led) him

Good description of the garden and Cedric's thoughts. I liked the bit if tension of his forgetting a gift. Enjoyed thoughts on the past, request for help w/a snow spell, then- what a kiss! Great writing of the scene, then Cedric's concerns. Also, that reply from Sofia. Well done!

Lovely! Very cute piece. ;-)

Okay, so, I apparently have read this one before. I like it. I thought it was really funny how Sofia acted like she couldn't do the spell just so Cedric would wrap his arms around her. I also liked the intensity of that kiss! But, there is one thing I don't like, and honestly don't understand. I've seen other writers do this, but I don't get where this comes from.

'Even if she did indeed long for him as he had her, it didn't mean others would approve. After all, they had many things going against them. Although the princess was now considered an adult, the age gap between them was still significant. Not to mention the gap in their status, as well as his checkered past. Surely with these factors, there was no way anyone would allow their relationship.'

'If his fears did come true, and they were torn apart.'

I don't understand how any two in love people, especially adults, could think like that. I mean, it's their life, so why do they both seem to think they don't have a say in it? I just want to slap them both, hard. It made the mood drop, just like the Baileywick thing earlier.

OMG I loved this so much! This was perfect and so innocent and pure in its own way, just like you would expect from Sofia and even Cedric. Great job! :] Plz write more!

Perfect! the scenery she created was lovely and beautiful and of course whatever followed the snowing spell. Liked both their thougths, even doubt over the declaration of their love or what the future holds. Great work!
Merry Christmas!

I loved. I never have enough stories of Cedfia, I always want more histories of them, I love this couple. * sigh * that nice gift of wassalia / Christmas.

This was a wonderful holiday story. I loved it! I hope you'll write more of these lovely stories. Merry Christmas!