TRUE THING
I LOVE SKASE

Oh boy, here we go again

Very very funny it was hard to not laugh when reading. This was a good no awesome story. You're a awesome writer this is one of my favorite ️ story

And I understand that you tried to balance it was just a bit weird sometimes seeing them go from happy to angry to sad so quickly

Also I just remembered but I swear I didn’t use the word wacky but anyway what I meant was that they were just sort of out of character for bits of the story

I’m glad you took the time to read my review and comment on it I was just pretty confused at some bits as they didn’t really make sense to me but even though as you said this story wasn’t 100% for me I enejoyed very much

Yeah sorry about that? you were the wrong person. Swift belonged to another story. Well I needed a pen name nothing came to mind so I thought about Zuma Lover since I am not aloud to use my real name it is one of the rules. I understand, you don't have to I was only asking cause I like one of you to use them to know what will they look like if they were in the T.V. show and one of you is friends to the director of Paw Patrol. I am learning how to draw them but I do want to know that they are there. I done five seasons so far in my series and starting season six. I have some fanficion stories too but I need a little help though, some are on the original Characters and some are on OCs. Please help me, I learning how to write Fanficion stories.

That was very innovative. A lot of these types of shipping stories would tend to have the pairing end up together no matter what happens - having it end on a bittersweet note like this was refreshing to say the least. And one that was very well-written at that. Nobody was blameless in this one, but it's nice that everyone made up in some capacity in the end. Bravo.

Great story and I think the other reviewers are right, a happy ending wouldn't have matched the rest of the story. I think how you ended things was perfect. It'd be hard to jump right into something after that, he needs time. I've noticed a lot of the "older" authors in this fandom saying the same thing in that the show hasn't provided much content to write about which sucks because I just found out how amazing this fandom is. The talent here is totally underrated. This was a great read! Bye!

And last but not least in a couple of years for dogs is ages or if you mean dog years that would be barely anything but overall GREAT STORY AND GOOD WORK I WISH YOU GOOD LICK ON YOUR NEXT STORY

Also it didn’t really make sense near the middle where skye said she didn’t like chase but later thought she had to feel something for him but then at the end saying that she would take any chance to be with him

If I have to be onhest i thought your characters were really wacky, all over the place and out of shape for most of the story but the way you ended it is nice and for me also brought the story back up

Can’t wait for the next chapter you post I really love your stories. Chase over and out

Will looks like the pups are going to have a talk with Ryder about what he just saw. Keep up the good work until next time Chase over

This is good. Will there be to this one in the new one to this one.