you gonna update

PLEASE UPDATE! I really like this! I've never really thought about the POV of a pokemon during the whole capture process! This is a really good story! I like the whole pokemon master relationship development!

plez update fast

This story is really cool D I hope you update it even though it's an old entry. You wrote the Pokemon to have such good characters that are different between them, the personalities are enjoyable to read. I wonder if Ozaki will meet up with Jaylen again? This story is so interesting )

I'll keep this bookmarked and hope for the next update- it's a fantastic story, and I really like how you paint a clear image of your characters in your writing. I also just plain like Umbreons (I like Pokemon in general, really, but I especially like the eeveelutions (and some other Pokemon such as Pikachu), especially Eevees and Umbreons). I also like the main character's personality. She's very entertaining.

By the way, "Jiragi" is actually spelled "Jirachi," just so you know. Oh, and I saw "Johto" and "Hoemn" misspelled a couple of times, I think.

I hope my review was decent, at least, without TOO much rambling, and again, I am definitely bookmarking this story and waiting for the next chapter!

Hm, that was certainly interesting! I really love where this story is leading and everything seems very well developed - story and characters alike. :) I do hope you keep writing this.

~Skylaar Wolf

awesome! update sooN! i hope she finds her trainer and eventually trusts him or something! you're an awesome writer! im happy you fixed the dialogue too :D UPDATE :D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

omg im so stupid,... lol i th ought Jaylen was Gary when you allready said his name is Jaylen,... wow...completely overlooked that,... im a nimrod :P great story. PLEASE improve on the speech parts, tho.

Oh! is Ozaki's master Gary? i dont know about the other one, but, i think it's gary,... Great story! although i kinda wish you'd figure out a different way to tell who's talking, cuz im sometimes confused about that. Anyhoo, I LOVE IT! KEEP UPDATING AND STUFF SINCE IM ONLY ON CHAPTER 4 AND I WANT TO KNOW THE WHOLE STORY! :D

It's awesome! Hehe, I've always liked Dark types. Though, now that you mention it it is a little odd that there is no 'deity' for Darks... Ah well, I just hope you update soon. It is a very good story after all.

Wow, this is realy good! The imagery is AMAZING! Keep it up! :D

I have 5 questions to ask you. 1. What is the plot of this fanfic? 2. Any idea on where it takes place? It most likely changes locations throughout this fanfic. 3. And when do you suppose it takes place? 4. Just how old is anyone that is in this fanfic? 5. Just what do you suppose the name of that Umbreon was? Be sure to answer these questions. And I will have a few more questions to ask you to answer later.

He-heh. _- How about team Aqua?

Sorry the review's late... cpu keeps freezing. VERY good chapter! Very fun, I'm having a good time listening to Ozaki, she's the best. five stars.

WOT! Now write more. - I love Okazi! She's funny!