| Reviews for Eternal Fantasy |
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Covante chapter 18 . 6/24 I know you were rushing through this but it could have really benefited from a team building arc before the conclusion. Something like, after they go to Hogwarts Draco gets another lead on a place to find more magic to put in jars; they have an adventure and get to know each other better and when they come back they discover the founders' towers have risen. It's just weird having them go up against the end boss after like a week of knowing each other. |
Gamelord42 chapter 19 . 6/19 Yet another of your fic I have enjoyed spending my time reading. It was a wonderful concept and an excellent execution. Now I'm back off to your profile to read more of your exceptional work! :D |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/14 I enjoyed the story, like some reviews have mentioned, he only got to see the bad visions with no context. None of the character even thought about how, if the world reverted back, thereād be no monsters that would kill and hurt people. No one seemed to think that it would be better not to have to fight for their lives all the time. Quite selfish for and cowardly for adventurers. |
EleanorVanRosaelle chapter 3 . 5/3 Blond man wizard ? Malfoy Lucius ? |
Isa Lumitus chapter 14 . 4/19 Crossing a whomping willow with a marlboro sounds like a great idea! Not just out of morbid curiosity, either. A surviving hybrid of Earth and Gaea magic might be able to produce a renewable source of Earth mana. That was an important point in a book I read once. There was a god trapped on earth, and he needed to eat divine materiel to survive. But he was the only source of that, so he was constantly fathering demigods to use as a food source. |
wolfzmasterz chapter 19 . 4/14 I really liked this story! I think it would be awesome if you dropped a few chapters here and there, if not a full story, of what happens next with the different adventures they get into and where their lives lead them from here. |
erica.phoenix16 chapter 19 . 4/7 Thanks for writing such a great story. :) |
ZombiePilot chapter 19 . 3/31 fantastic story and setting. even if you never plan to do a sequel I think one shots of the group's adventures might be easier to write. itd also be awesome to read, this is for sure your best setting. period. and definitely one of your best stories. |
Deana Gem chapter 19 . 3/5 Thank you! |
Mernom chapter 19 . 3/3 It was an interesting story at the beginning, but it felt a bit less so approaching the end. I do like how the characters ended up bring with their alternative backgrounds. A Draco/Dudley who actually had to put in effort and wound up being a decent person? Yes please. I still have an unanswered question though... WHY is Harry a catnip counterpart for mundane Stellis? |
Crest1 chapter 19 . 3/2 What a ride! At first I did not know if I'd enjoy this, but it is sooo good. Actually, I want more! I absolutely enjoyed reading this dystopian, end-of-times, collapsing world - even though I have never played Final Fantasy at all. So good. I think I am going to go back and add a comment to each chapter soon, if only to give this story the additional Reviews. Thanks for an excellent story! |
thereaperd chapter 19 . 2/28 Well, if this one nibbles on your ear in the future, it's not like you can't write a sequel with them visiting the other lands. It'd likely be more of a slice of life story than this one but, that's up to you. Maybe they encounter a group of very pissed off Bulgarian old Earth mages. Or, god forbid, the MACUSA group vs the native american casters that have no problem with the transition. |
unanimously anonymous. mostly chapter 19 . 2/28 This was an enjoyable read, thank you. |
Arrowman chapter 19 . 2/28 Loved this story. Thank you for this. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 19 . 2/28 A relative flat ending for this story, but overall very good, a sense of hope for the quarted in the dog eats dog world Gaia is. Curious to see if there will ever be a sequel, good work. |