I really liked this story. it was so different from most of the things I llike to read. this Edwards was a vindictive self absorb, ass!

Had to re-read. Just so fantastically done. Thanks for writing!

i love happy endings, especially when Edward gets his comeuppance!

i know it's not meant to be but this chapter is hilarious. Edward really thought he was going to be let off with a slap on the wrist. and to be turned out of Volterra into Jaspers' waiting fists is just icing on the cake.

Awesome Story!

It's very confusing how this Stone guy keeps switching back and forth between Jedediah and Henry...can't tell if it's an unfinished edit, or if the guy is actually supposed to have two first names.

Thank you for sharing this one with us.

Quite intriguing

Wonderful story!

I always find the whole torture and revenge thing a bit tedious. I get that Jasper (esp if he’d been the one to find Bella), might want it, or Bella if he’d also hurt or killed Ellie, then sure.
But for Esme to feel that way seems out if character, and a bit unnecessary.

I like the effect the unexplained mating pull is having on Jasper (unexplained to him, that is).

I’m a little confused about the fact that Sharon supposedly checked on Ellie, and she was sleeping, after Doug was killed. Was there a decoy in place?

I’ll keep reading...

Also, I meant to say, I’m quite liking the jumping POVs.

I’m surprised how much I’m liking Jane this time around. Poor Carlisle. Such disillusionment.

Okay, you know I’m not a fan of anti-Edward and Alice stories, but at least Alice is sympathetic in this one and it’s a while since I found a new Bella-Jasper story that’s both decently written and not abandoned... so I’m excited.

I loved this story. I think it was one of your best. I like Radius settled with a remunerated centuries of being alone. Renee always a bitch. Alice was helpful not vengeful. I don't like Ben that happens. I just enjoyed the story. Thank you.