Reviews for The Ghostly Islander
repliedgrunt14 chapter 3 . 6/25
never knew I wanted to read something like this. Absolutely love it dude!
GhostRider00 chapter 3 . 5/30
More please
Luxy chapter 3 . 4/29
Please update
Avenger2003 chapter 2 . 2/20
Best Danny Phantom/Total Drama crossover on this site. I know you haven't updated in nearly a year but please please continue. If not could you at least let someone adopt the story.
jocoleman2017 chapter 3 . 10/31/2019
Please update this story!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/8/2019
Camp begins
FrostHunter chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
Interesting indeed
OrguMiMi chapter 3 . 8/27/2019
Nice I hope you continue this
OrguMiMi chapter 3 . 5/12/2019
I am excited for the future of this fanwork
LovelyLuly chapter 3 . 5/7/2019
Really? Your Cody, Harold and Noah seem pretty on character so far! Congratulations
Calmoose415 chapter 3 . 3/10/2019
Are you going to update “The Legend of Four Brothers” soon?
icedshadows chapter 3 . 3/9/2019
okay... this is something amazing and I truly like this. keep having qmwriting this please. DON'T LOOSE THE FLAAAAAAMMMEEE!
stay icesome
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2019
Did chef notice something about Danny that would make him respect a little more after everything Danny's has endure chef would had notice something different about Danny after all the battles and struggles chef might not be as aggressive to him. Can't wait for the next chapter really enjoying the story
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2019
Love it
Halzy chapter 3 . 3/5/2019
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM:
It's a good story, the only thing i would recommend is reading back through it to catch little thing, and look out for repeating phrases like "his crystalline eyes," or the comparisons to butter in chapter one. It's an easy thing to miss, so you have o think about how many times you use certain phrases. a great way to do this is to write it out, take a break, then reread it. Keep in mind other things you can use to rephrase the sentence, like "his shining blue eyes." Similarly, don't use one example in two scenarios. like how you wrote about the butter knife. A great example, visual and common, but be sure to change it up a bit so readers aren't lost in the repetition. "...like a butter knife through butter... she cut through the water like butter." Its not that you can only use the comparison once through the whole story, but make sure it balances out.
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