| Reviews for Break a Sweat |
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Jessicaa1567 chapter 1 . 10/7 Loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2019 Love it |
mieh chapter 1 . 1/6/2019 Seriously, where have you been all this time? Why, how, how come I haven't been reading you fics before? This was so we'll written, in character, fun, sweet... Just everything! I want more of this exact version of darvey! So much more. You can just write they can ride home, Donna dead tired on the couch, their shower and other fat-burning activities... Everything! I want to read it all! Related so much and laughed so hard at Donna's blinding rage in the face o cardio, wanting to murder Harvey hahahaha and he was so sweet! Really loved this one! |
AnonymousDH chapter 2 . 12/28/2018 Shdjdjjsjsjajajjaja this is amazing. I love how domestic they are, the banter. How stubborn Donna is and how much Harvey just wants her to be okay. Lies about the distance, his speed and everything. Love that. Also the two older women and the little chat they had, perfect. Loved this |
Rose4darvey chapter 1 . 12/22/2018 Such a cute story. Love Harvey teasing her. Thanks for posting. |
PurryCat chapter 1 . 12/22/2018 Lovely. Thanks so much for sharing! |
krystalsteph chapter 1 . 12/22/2018 OMG those old ladies? Hysterical. I can totally picture it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2018 Aww I liked that bit with Mavis and Helen. I always love to read from you! Such a sweet story. I could easily see that happening! |
Nannalyn chapter 1 . 12/22/2018 Haha! Oh, this was so funny and sweet. Thank you! I can really picture Mavis and Helen. Donna should go power-walking with them one day - I bet that would be entertaining! |
carlota206 chapter 1 . 12/22/2018 Love the cuteness factor in the story. Amazing. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2018 This was so fun to read! Thank you for writing these Christmas stories. I really love the way you write. |