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I just read this and I absolutely loved it! I can totally see why you stopped here, even though I would have loved to read about this version of Bella getting pregnant, telling Edward, surviving being pregnant, childbirth and raising baby to say 18 months old. However, that’s not going to happen, but it doesn’t mean that I can’t want it! You are a gifted writer and I love how you flesh out these different versions of favorite Twilight & FSOG characters. I could read your Fanfic’s everyday and never be bored. ️

This Bella is so rude and selfish and only thinks about herself. I completely respect her decision to not want children but to not even let Edward talk about it or express his emotions and get angry and shout at him when all he wants to do is talk to her? She’s pathetic she’s right she would make a horrible mother and Edward deserves so much better

Ok, so, your writing is sooo good and the story is awesome. But I've to admit that I very disappointed with the end.
Apparently she changed her mind and will have kids, and obviously nothing is wrong with that because she should have a choice without judgement, but like someone who doesn't want kids and doesn't change mind, I expect for a HEA where they stayed without kids and been happy that way.
After all, the end only reforced that women who doesn't want kids will change her mind with the right guy, or will regret it later if don't. And it's very annoying hear that kind of argument through the role life.
The story is really great, just a outburst of mine, expect to not bother you.
Sorry for any mistakes, English isn't my first language.

I cried like a baby reading this. I love these two. I don't want to know the rest of their story, because this is PERFECT. Thank you.

Very sweet story

What a great and realistic perspective on what some couples might go through. I enjoyed reading this, thanks.

So...theyre gonna have a kid?

I knew quite young that I didnt want to have kids. Im 51, never changed my mind, no regrets. My mom once said that she knew Id be a good mom, but I wouldnt enjoy it. I think thats a good way to put it. I never dated men that wanted or had children, as thats always been a deal breaker for me. Now Ive hit menopause and that ship has sailed. Yay! My sister had two kids, so I was off the hook, but both of my parents supported my decision. Its really not for everyone.

This was cute. Bella and Edward finally had an adult conversation about kids. Nothing is resolved but at least they're talking.

Loved it. Very well written on such a touchy subject. Why do people think something is wrong with a woman is she doesn’t want children?

Oh hell no... please.

Thank you!

O.O

Amazing!

You always have such great ideas. I LOVE your stories! I get so emotionally invested in your characters and start to feel the feels!

Great plot. Great job!

Wanted to comment when I first read, but needed time to digest.
I love your writing. And for the most part, I love this story. Nowadays it's rare to read anything with a CF slant.
I'm CF choice. About 3 years into my marriage my husband and I had the discussion. I could not guarantee I would change my mind about kids and if he really wanted them we should divorce. He told me if they weren't with me, he didn't want them. He'd rather be with me without kids than not.
We're the awesome aunt and uncle. So this story resonates with me.
However I'm a little unsure how I feel about the end. While there is no clear resolution, I don't like the slant that she may change her mind. Not every one is meant to have kids. Why is it "wrong " to not have kids?
I'm no longer able to get pregnant, but I do not regret my life choice and neither does my husband.

So back to the review.. Great writing as usual with the feels. Just disappointed with the end.