Please add a trigger warning to this for non-consensual or dubious consent. Just because she gives up or gets wet doesn't make it consentual sex, especially when he tells her it is happening with or without it.

Like with your other story, I am going to beg you to continue this fic. Im curious to see Kylo use Rey's talents for making weapons and even come to train her, he'll probably also discover she already has some fighting skills. Plus I can see some good conflict come from the fact that Hux wanted her and was taken by Kylo, so I can see Hux starting up some stuff. Please, please, PLEASE continue!

This was a really nice, plausible bit of romantic smut. I quite enjoyed it. You did well with the setting.

I was asked by several ladies to write a smutty fic in a different fandom and know the challenge it can be to get things hot without becoming too lewd or in poor taste. I think you managed to be both erotic and tasteful. Frankly, I think that, overall, women write the best smut, even porn. The Fifty Shades books were written by a woman, as were several similar books that I read to get a feel for the genre before writing some sex-based fics of my own.

What comes next? Has Kylo really conquered this little vixen? Will she flee as he sleeps? Will he chain her in his tent before he slumbers? I wrote a tale in which a determined British girl was able to flee her Arab master because he forgot to chain her to the ring in the floor by his bed.

You can flesh this out as a continuing account of the pair as their acquaintance grows, next time you crave an erotic fantasy in the wee hours of the morning. I hope you enjoyed this daydream as much as I enjoyed reading it.

And I hope you get some other good reviews. The story deserves them. You're a good writer.