Obito huh, I would imagine the fight to be something close to when Kakashi and Obito fight in Obito dimension

Real life always comes before . Take your time

Yes i really like ultear x naruto... look forward to more chapters

Please tell me that you're not an english speaker, because the amount of errors that you have in a chapter that is less than 1,000 words is honestly disgusting. Also for the love of all that is unholy stop capitalizing the first letter of every word.

Hope this pairing is a NarutoxUltear and ONLY NarutoxUltear so please don't change it into a harem, it's gonna become shite
Also I got 2 questions that I hope you can answer in the next chapter.
1. Will Naruto be paired with Ultear, if not then with whom (that's one question, don't try to be a smart-ass)
And 2. Is he gonna leave Fairy tail
PS. I hope he does

PPS: Great story the grammar needs more work but other then that it's amazing
Hope you update soon

yes give him all the rinnegan alblites

The Mangekyō has one ability per eye, and the Susano'o comes from unlocking the Mangekyō in both eyes. Since Naruto has Tsukuyomi, he can only have one other Ability in his other eye. Izanami and Izanagi are just automatically there if you have the eyes to use for them, and when used, the eye that was used will be forever blind and not able to be used.. If you don't have the eye, you can't use the Ability from that eye. However, the Susano'o can always be used once it's already been unlocked. Basically, you can either use an ability already in the Naruto series or make up your own for the ability that he hasn't unlocked. All the EMS does is allow a person to not go blind from using the abilities along with making their Mangekyō Abilities easier to use. Also, Izanami and Izanagi will still make the eye used for them go blind.

Is that Shinoa from "Owari no Serah" ?
And Naruto having Chakra Issue ?
You know that guy has insane amount of it. He wouldn't feel tired after expending energy equivalent to tailed beast bomb... And he's chakra expenditure is nowhere near that level.

Oh that was a fun chapter. The pace is a little to quick and we don't see much interaction of Naruto with his guildmates. Naruto is written cold and distant due to him having other ties, but maybe experiment with Naruto getting close with a single member to form an unlikely bond or something.

i feel your really underemining Naruto's chakra capacity by like a fucking lot, Naruto's chakra level at age 12 probably rivaled or surpassed Kisame hoshigaki who was known as the tailless tailed beast or something like that because of his chakra levels. the 9 tailed beasts are giant creatures made of chakra that was devided from a creature comparable to a god called the ten tails.

Great an OC...

This better not be a pairing of Naruto and Erza. I am absolutely tired of people’s obsession with her.

Sure hope the story quality improves after this chapter

great chapter , i just wish you make naruto do something in future arcs , we are just basically following cannon with just some conversation from naruto . he needs to fight some ppl , change the scenes a little . like here instead of natsu fighting deliore could have made naruto be the one or something like that . anyway i am glad you are giving naruto mangekyo sharingan ability , i was thinking of dropping it coz he seemed weak , so i am glad . also i keep reading you mention naruto losing chakara really fast , just to let you know if he keep using chakra with all the mangekyo ability he wouldnt feel the slightest bit of being tired , he has an amount of chakra that would make kage level ninja ashamed . so please dont make him look weak always mentioning his lose of chakra . sorry for the long review , just wanted to say all this and also i enjoyed this story and hope you update soon.

this was great and naruto and ultea scene , that was great but i am confused , how can naruto be low on chakara ? that chakara monster is low on chakra just because he used medical jutsu ? he basically did nothing on this whole mission . is this gonna be a weak naruto story ?! if so i dont think i can keep reading .