Look i don't want to be rude as english isn't your naitive tunge, but you really need to get your gender specific adjetives and prnouns right.

He, His- MALE SPECIFIC ONLY

She, her- FEMALE SPECIFIC ONLY.
Simple things like this make an entire experience on its own when reading and can break your story. And i don't mean this to sound as a grammar Nazi, but if im confused as the the gender of a character because your using the wrong pronouns then perhaps you need a little more practice.

Nevertheless intresting story and i will follow it closely to see how it develops

You haven't updated in a year, and what I don't know what to say. Look, I don't judge based on titles or summary, but you haven't really gone far on posting or doing anything with this story.

I wonder how this happened. Was it because ever since you made Naruto god-like, you haven't made a compelling character that has struggles or becomes relatable? Was it because these types of stories are uncreative and lack imagination and foresight on the actual story you could have been writing? Either way, you could have done better. I really hope you build on this and make it into a real story one day, but until then, here we are.

Me gusta mucho, por favor no tardes tanto en actualizar, acaso naruto tiene muchas personalidades.?

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Very VERY interesting... But looks like you update once every other year...

Intresting, just dont do bashing

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Great story continue as soon as possible please cannot wait to see what happens next

So is this gonna be a Naruto x kaguya ship?

Your English is actually really good considering it isn't your mother-tongue

Damn near a whole year for a chapter lol

Interesting. Hope you update soon.

make it so that the story progression is fast but not too fast

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So... did Naruto have a change in gender because he ate the fruit? That is really unclear.