To the author..Elliott Kaiden your story 'Drip Too Hard" what a very good written story of the characters Buffy, Jonah B. of the Andimack Disney show.

your plot of "Buffy Driscoll finds the former crush of her two best friends playing basketball shirtless" ] and finds herself pulled in his direction,[ unable to keep herself from getting competitive with the shirtless boy. ]"

At the later middle part and ensd of the story I see how it's rated M. ..I just have read your story Dec 19th 2018.. Your story is ramance with a touch of sex, I truly can see how it can be continued into a chapter 2.

I love that you set up te plot or story where Buffy is almost getting ready to give him a "blow" ..I love how you describe the ..Tip of his thick cock,.. touching Buffy's face ..and Buffy teasing him remarking ..."Ih that's not dripping much..unlike yours which based on your stain looks like it's almost pouring out..." and Buffy teasing back "You're gonna be so wet when i'm done, Beck."..Setting up the continuation of Buffy giving Driscoll a tremendous blow job ..I hope that you write it as it would / will be Buffy's very ffirst time ever giving a blow job to any boy...also letting it be Driscoll's first time experiencing a blow job !

SuggestionYou should describe Buffy's bi -racial body, her (black-asian) feaures and color ..describe her
fourteen year olds breasts which are bigger than andi's so they are probably ..30-B to 32-A cup size and her brown perky, hard nipples. .. then going down to her "virgin" pussy...which is almost but [ not quite bald pussy with just some sexy black curls ] on her, ..and that is if and only if you make the story go that far !

Or as to maybe finger-f-cking, or eating out her "virgin" pussy ...I would personally NOT go that far in a chapter two.

I would only go as far as maybe some
finger-f-cking by his hand and fingers gently reaching around inside Buffy's panty ...Surprisingly being a Lacy Thong ..as Buffy is the athletic type.

His hand moved to rest on her waist, gently pulling her body closer to his as he whispered against her lips.

"Take off your shirt." She broke the kiss to oblige, sitting up and pulling the fabric over her head. Laying back down, she shifted to make herself comfortable as Val moved to sit up on his knees. He lifted his own shirt over his head, throwing it behind him. She stared at his torso, allowing her fingertips to gently brush over his stomach.

Moving to straddle her, Val braced a knee either side of her slender form before leaning down to press a firm kiss to her lips, tongue sliding between them to explore her mouth. Her hands took a firm grip of his backside through his jeans, gently kneading his cheeks while the kiss became little more than tongue, teeth and passion. A gentle moan spilled from her lips, and he gestured for her to sit up so that he could unhook her bra. After he did so, he eagerly reattached his lips to her warm flesh while he pulled it off. He pressed kisses against the hollow of her throat, ensuring to cover her entire neck in kisses before shifting downwards. He licked and nibbled at the hollows gently, inhaling against her warm, sweet-smelling skin. His hands took a light grip of her breasts, massaging them ever so gently in his large palms before mumbling. "You're so damn beautiful..."

Her breath caught in her throat, and she couldn't help but let her back arch upwards as his thumb brushed over a nipple. She could feel familiar warmth pooling between her legs, and her heart rate began to increase as he moved further south. A gentle whimper escaped her mouth as his lips enveloped her left nipple, suckling lightly on the erect bud. His thumb and forefinger gently pinched the other, rough pad of his thumb swiping over the sensitive surface. He allowed his teeth to graze the nipple in his mouth just slightly, before pulling off and glancing up at her face. "Let me know if I'm moving too fast, sweetheart." She shook her head slowly, looking down at him with a warm smile.

Here is my idea ( s ) of how you could if you wish to make or continue a chaptr two ...P.S. If you use any of my ideas please give me a small mention at the very end ..
So here is my idea (s) or suggestion...
"No... No, keep going. Please." The word 'please' caused a smirk to grow on his features, and he pinched Buffy's brown nipple slightly harder in response, causing her to moan again. He popped open the button on her jeans, wriggling them down her legs until they fell to the floor. He took his time to sit back on his knees and admire her nearly-nude form, feeling his shaft twitching in anticipation.

Then if you want to continue ...
Buffy You are gorgeous, as he is looking at her smile grow wider, he ducks down so that he could lean between her legs, spreading them slightly apart pressing his tongue against the crotch of Buffy's lacy panties. He moaned at the taste of her juices through the thin fabric, drawing back for a moment before he began to trace gentle, abstract patterns with his tongue. This drew a string of moans from Buffy as her hips rising off of the [ maybe gym bench ] orc bed for a moment. ...As he pulled back again, slowly pulling her underwear down her legs so that she was completely nude for him. "Do you want my fingers, Buffy?" ...
She gasped nodding then clamping her thighs together to try to control the wetness that was growing between them. She would be dripping for him soon, and she needed him to do something about it.

( this part to continue would be up to you ...Buffy repsonding ...
"Please, yes." He nodded slowly, placing a palm flat on her stomach and slowly - torturously so - sliding it downwards towards her warm, wet "virgin" core. His index finger lightly brushed over her moist wet clit, making her cry out and thrust her hips up sharply, causing him to grin...Driscoll .. his finger starting to nudge the sensitive bundle of nerves again and then before, without any warning, he slipped the whole digit inside his girlfriend. ..Buffy gasping and shifting to try and accommodate the intrusion, her tight, wet pussy walls clenching around his finger. ]

I took some time to write this part of a story...and
if you so wish to make a chapter two,...
...[ I would / shoud give some thanks to EKlein1998 ...who I took from some of his untitled work...and I should give a shout out to ( the TomDaya smut series . )

From a Fan
J.M.

Amazing story! Please chapter 2 soon!

Omg this is good! Pls update soon