I say ignore the haters - this was such a sweet, fluffy story and I loved it! (I know I'm not really reading this at Christmastime, but whatever.)

I am absolutely loving these! They’re so well done. You really are quite the writer. Nothing feels artificial or corny, and I can absolutely picture everything that’s going on. What a wonderful thing to discover after having seen the movie for these many years. You can be sure I’ll be reading everything!

This was a very cute story. I don't usually go in for fluff, but this was quite enjoyable. I liked your Sarah and especially your Linda. Jareth's family did seem a bit mundane for such a magical character, but I think they fit well with this specific Jareth, who has changed quite a bit from movie version Jareth.

There were some errors that took me out of the story a few times (lack of necessary commas, GED instead of GRE, improperly formatted dialogue, verb tense changes), but I was a professional editor and trained to notice such things. Even so, I'll be looking for your other stories, since I enjoyed this one so much.

This is such a cute and sweet story! Perfect to read over Winter, I loved how there was a little conflict but not too much, as much as I love big dramatic stories, sometimes it's really nice to have something easier to read that warms your heart!

Your story was very sweet. Thank you for sharing it!

Happy New Year! To be honest, I don't know why people would complain about the ending. I thought it was pretty good. I love how Jareth and Sarah interact with their families, and most definitely Linda isn't like how she is in your others. I am hoping that you will come out with more stories about the two of them soon!

What an amazing end! I love how Jareth is with family. It was absolutely brilliant, I don’t know why the negative reviews exist. You did an amazing job.

Great story!

That was a very nice story. Very fluffy. Happy New Year. Have a good day. Keep smiling. :-)

Great

Nareszcie J. wykazał więcej czułej inicjatywy, mam nadzieję że nie poprzestanie na tym. Cudownie się to czyta. Wszyscy ludzie tęsknią za miłością i czułością, Wszyscy życzmy sobie więcej miłości w nowym roku. Czekam na epilog

Ten 10 punkt w liście J. to coś dla mnie, ja też łapię się na tym że magia google translation nieraz zawodzi i przetłumaczy kulawo i wychodzi inny kontekst. To będzie moje postanowienie noworoczne :)

His family and house sound way too suburban for my liking ...

Awesome

Dzisia spędzili kolejny miłe popołudnie rodzinnie, ale to późny wieczór sprawił że poczułam oczekiwanie na ciąg dalszy. To dobrze, że J. złożył S. tak późną wizytę. Sprawy zaczynają przybierać oczekiwany obrót. Czekam aż J. przestanie być wreszcie taki grzeczny