Monkey Boy: My time has come.

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It was interesting to see Tatsumi go through a series of tests in order to be inducted into the Sorrowful Ones as well as Sheele being his guide throughout them. I like how he spared the two women in the kill someone test but killed the man who was worse then even the Northerner woman. I also like the pirate woman whose one of Honest's children, she seems all right.

Also, I like how you wrote Naru Hoshido. She's as I imagined her to be and will make a good wife for Tatsumi. I look forward to seeing her in action in the next chapter.

I'm pleased that Bokassa's forces have been dealt a nasty blow. He'll be getting desperate now that he's lost his ability to attack his foes. An idea you should consider involving Bokassa is to show or have mentioned that he tends to personally execute people he hates by beating them to death with his elaborate sceptre, even kids. The real Bokassa was said to have executed several children prior to his fall from power by beating them to death with his sceptre so it wouldn't be a stretch to have Bokassa in your story do the same plus I want to further build him up as a bad guy that the readers WANT to see killed by Tatsumi.

Speaking of Tatsumi, I imagine him and Bokassa hurling insults at each other during their fight and bickering over who the rightful emperor is /which is Tatsumi of course/.

Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. you know tatsumi loves his brothels lol. Wonder if he'll have time in this city's ones lol.

Daaaaaaaaaaaamn, I don’t know wher you get your plot, characters, or ideas, but you never fail to impress! Another awesome chapter. Hope you’re staying safe and doing good in mourning. See you soon!

What does Darkar and Asha look like, and I want not only a description but a picture as well?

Someone asked YandereDev about what he thinks of this story and he said things that are horrible and even about you but he said these stories suck and that there should've been a more lemon scene of that little girl getting raped.

Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. looks like another wife/partner in umbra showed up lol. One things for sure is that no mercy for the so called emperor of the south. Probably a huge rapeist, pediphobe, and all other sort of crime lords do lol.

I like how Nancy punched Mine for calling her mother a whore and for how everyone gave Mine a hard time for giving Sheele a hard time for exposing one of her breasts with her outfit.

I also liked the history lesson involving the Empire of old. It was quite informative and it sounds like Umber's father is going to be quite stubborn and hard to persuade to ally with Tatsumi. He's going to have to do something BIG to repair his line's lineage with Umber's father. Perhaps he could clean out the hold that the Skaven control? Having a Skaven kingdom around isn't good for Eden as it'll inspire other Skaven to do the same and unite which would cause everyone else major problems.

I'm glad that you included my ideas for Warlord Bokassa and how ridiculous but savage he is. Since he's declared himself Emperor of the "Great Southern Empire" and plans to eventually take over all of the late Golden Empire's territory and beyond, he's a threat to Tatsumi's claim to the Imperial Throne and a rival to Tatsumi's Golden Dragon Empire. Tatsumi obviously will NOT tolerate Bokassa's antics and will crush this brash upstart to his rule.

For the record, my idea about Warlord Bokassa was inspired by African dictators and by certain Imperial Warlords from the Star Wars Expanded Universe.

As for Belloq, he's a slimy worm who I can't wait to see killed off. Please write the next chapter as soon as you're able to do so.

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Hate to tell you Neo, the thing with Giants is as a certain badass marine said "Their tough, but they ain't invincible." and a explosives would be one of their weaknesses.

First off, I'm sorry about your bird Woodstock. May he or she find peace in the afterlife and may you be reunited with him or her at some point. By the way, it claims that I already reviewed this fic even though the review isn't showing up so I'm posting this without logging in.

Anyhow, I quite liked this chapter. It had a lot of action and sex in it. I liked the battle with the Tyrant and how Tyrant's Peak got renamed Tatsumi Peak. Now the Northern Dwarves have gotten back their lost hold and can become wealthy with all of the mountain's gold. Why did the Dwarves kill the Tyrant's mate and put her soul in a machine though? Did she go on a rampage long ago?

Also, I'm glad to see Esdeath being reunited with her long lost brother and that the Northern Tribe that wiped out their tribe has itself been wiped out plus Tatsumi's forces struck a critical blow against Volgoth's plans. I imagine that he felt the Nexus's destruction and growled in anger at being set back further. Seeing Osawa behave like a yandere when killing Daeva was creepy yet it shows how devoted she is to Tatsumi, I of course made Osawa that way.

I also liked the part of the chapter with the Giants, they're a pretty kickass people and now that Tatsumi has married a giantess, he can do giantess fantasies with her, LOL! On a more serious note, with giants, cat people AND Northern Dwarves in his forces, his anti-demon coalition is taking shape. If I were Volgoth, I'd be quite concerned and would be pulling out all the stops to win /if I had his evil mindset/.

Can you imagine if Tatsumi deploys giants for battles in conflicts in Galaxy at War? The battle droids and other enemies of the Golden Dragon Empire would freak out and run!

Anyhow, good work on this chapter. I look forward to the next one.

Great chapter full of action and sex, it was a pleasure to read it!

About the giantess princess, he can do giantess fantasy stuff with her which to be honest makes me quite envious of Tatsumi. I quite like the giants, can you imagine if Tatsumi used them in the various conflicts of the Star Wars universe in Galaxy at War? I think that the enemies of the Golden Dragon Empire would run away in fear...

The Tyrant was scary but I do wonder why the Dwarves killed his mate and put her soul into one of their machines. Also, was he the last Tyrant on Eden?

I'm glad that Esdeath is reunited with her long lost brother and that the Northern tribe responsible for the destruction of her clan has been destroyed along with the black ruins and nexus that they guarded.

Finally, I'm sorry for the death of your pet bird Woodstock. May he or she rest in peace...

Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Wonder about the dwarves and the marriage situation lol. At least he has a landmark of sorts with a peak named after him lol.