This was adorable. One of the main reasons I find this ship so cute. Also only Ruby could make firearm maintenance so fucking hot lol. Definitely a 5/5 one shot I can only hope you do a full Lancaster story one day.

I very much like it

I think you did a pretty damn good job with this short story. The smut was well written in my opinion and the story had some amusing moments.

I really liked this almost innocent brand of smut. Please keep going. It would be cool to read about Ruby and Jaune awkwardly learning g about each others "weapons".

Careful Ruby.

It's got a hair trigger.

I cant stop sniggering about jaune getting flash banged by Ruby's sex triggered silver eyes XD lol that was a 'stroke' (I blame yang) of genius ! XD

As spicy as piri-piri (local sauce that's almost as bad as wasabi). Me likey.

I think im the only one who read the description and thought "oh hey Jaunes finally getting a firearm or something" but nope instead i got incredible porn.

Lol, sweet

whelp, i loved it. but here's a fun fact: Ruby's petals disappear after a while. they are made of aura and so dont last without her. at least that's what the manga says

I want more, that's what I think. Great job!

Ruby made me laugh when she say “diddle your junk.” I wasn’t expecting to hear that from Ruby. It’s like you were expecting something to happen and when I did happen you still wasn’t expecting it to happen.

And hilarious how Jaune got flashbanged at the end. I’m not saying it’s a mood killer. This may make me sound like a creep but just imagining Ruby flashbanging someone when she cums is kinda hilarious. Like a scenario where everything is how and steamy and then boom a flash of light, like you went to a crazy techno club but all the strobe lights are WHITE, like something holy light was being shown behind a door that was lock up for a while.

Anyway if you decide to continue this sorry, I can get behind it. But if it’s a one shot then I’m ok with that too.

You could make this an entire story if you wanted to. Their passphrase to go and do the dirty could’ve been “go and get your gun” and they’d have to be super secretive about their hiding spots and who is tailing them and how to escape. Only Nora would know and help them out sometimes. Plus Nora would laugh her ass off while everyone else would keep on guessing what’s going on. Then you could go on to Vol 6 where they meet the Cotta-Arcs and ‘make a baby’ because of how cute Adrian is or something. I don’t know friend, it’s just an idea

OTP! OTP! OTP!

I liked it! Still I must point out the tonal whiplash that was going on. First we get start off with some Linkin Park, then we go into smexy stuff, then ends off with some slight angst.

Its not bad, but it just seems out of place.

That was totally adorable and I kinda have a boner now